for Manhattan Love Story5/1/2001 c6 
2L.E. Lamkin
WOW! That's all I can say. WOW! You are REALLY good. No, scratch that. DAMN good. This is like, a thousand times better than MY silly story. You are so talented. I love your metaphor about "Sam I Am" and everything. It's very refreshing to read something of this caliber at FFN. You are way talented, don't let any "bad reviews" get you down, all right? Man, this story is AWEsome! I can't wait for more...
2L.E. LamkinWOW! That's all I can say. WOW! You are REALLY good. No, scratch that. DAMN good. This is like, a thousand times better than MY silly story. You are so talented. I love your metaphor about "Sam I Am" and everything. It's very refreshing to read something of this caliber at FFN. You are way talented, don't let any "bad reviews" get you down, all right? Man, this story is AWEsome! I can't wait for more...
5/1/2001 c5 L.E. Lamkin
This was an EXCELLENT chapter! Only one mistake: it's "Que sera, sera". It's spanish. But other than, GOD! It's like you get transported into another world. Anthony and Ben feel like real people and the way you describe things is wonderful. You are an excellent author, and I see a very good future for you! On to Ch.6...
This was an EXCELLENT chapter! Only one mistake: it's "Que sera, sera". It's spanish. But other than, GOD! It's like you get transported into another world. Anthony and Ben feel like real people and the way you describe things is wonderful. You are an excellent author, and I see a very good future for you! On to Ch.6...
4/30/2001 c6 1ilawap
While I'm not all about this type of love stories at all, I did think this was kind of interesting in the beginning. You're losing me now. (My favorite cousin just came out, actually, and I'm kind of wondering about this...) Anywho, good job I guess.
1ilawapWhile I'm not all about this type of love stories at all, I did think this was kind of interesting in the beginning. You're losing me now. (My favorite cousin just came out, actually, and I'm kind of wondering about this...) Anywho, good job I guess.
4/26/2001 c4 L.E. Lamkin
Wow, this is really good so far. You're a great author. I've written a novel about homosexual teens as well. It's called Pathways. I think we should chat sometime. Are you planning on continuing this anytime soon? It's very good.
Wow, this is really good so far. You're a great author. I've written a novel about homosexual teens as well. It's called Pathways. I think we should chat sometime. Are you planning on continuing this anytime soon? It's very good.
4/25/2001 c4 goldeneagle
Get the next part out soon! I really like this. It's great so far.
Get the next part out soon! I really like this. It's great so far.
4/25/2001 c2 ann
i think this story is very interesting, the descpriptions are great, beacuse they make it as if you are really there.
i think this story is very interesting, the descpriptions are great, beacuse they make it as if you are really there.
4/21/2001 c1 1Tairah Josephine
I really like this story, especially about the main characters being gay, I can definitely relate to that. Keep up with the story, I want to see what happens!
1Tairah JosephineI really like this story, especially about the main characters being gay, I can definitely relate to that. Keep up with the story, I want to see what happens!
4/21/2001 c1 GoldenEagle
I think it's great so far. Written very well, with a lot of good detail. I'm a Christian, and I don't think homosexuality is right, but I don't think that a homosexual is to be any different from someone else. Well, that's a long topic. Email me if you want to discuss it. Again, great thus far. You are going to add more, aren't you?
I think it's great so far. Written very well, with a lot of good detail. I'm a Christian, and I don't think homosexuality is right, but I don't think that a homosexual is to be any different from someone else. Well, that's a long topic. Email me if you want to discuss it. Again, great thus far. You are going to add more, aren't you?
4/21/2001 c1 Lovin'Brolli not logged on
i enjoyed this a lot. i hope you'll post more!
i enjoyed this a lot. i hope you'll post more!