
1/12/2019 c12
1HooviK
Hello FP!
So overwhelming to see such great reviews on my little story, with the added joy that its still being read 8 years later.
Unfortunately my old id is not salvageable, hence the new one. Im going to repost this story, and though it breaks my heart that my beautiful reviews will not be transferred, i sincerely hope you all find me again.
Lots of love, and many many thanks
Hoovi

Hello FP!
So overwhelming to see such great reviews on my little story, with the added joy that its still being read 8 years later.
Unfortunately my old id is not salvageable, hence the new one. Im going to repost this story, and though it breaks my heart that my beautiful reviews will not be transferred, i sincerely hope you all find me again.
Lots of love, and many many thanks
Hoovi
9/21/2018 c1 Guest
Is swarah same as vanni? So far it is interesting
Is swarah same as vanni? So far it is interesting
9/19/2018 c12 Guest
Also this world would be a much better place if everyone considering hitting your wife (or any woman) a beghairiti...
Also this world would be a much better place if everyone considering hitting your wife (or any woman) a beghairiti...
9/19/2018 c12 Guest
He’s finally gonna be nicer to her and will stop doing whatever his father feels needs to be down for their izzat/revenge right? I need closure!
He’s finally gonna be nicer to her and will stop doing whatever his father feels needs to be down for their izzat/revenge right? I need closure!
6/22/2018 c1 Guest
am learning a lot about pakistan from this.
am learning a lot about pakistan from this.
1/26/2018 c12 Guest
So Ahad likes her but doesn’t want her to know? It seems like her father in law is really the problem here but her character readings are a bit off the mark. Well, I don’t think you’ll ever finish this but it was definitely an interesting read.
So Ahad likes her but doesn’t want her to know? It seems like her father in law is really the problem here but her character readings are a bit off the mark. Well, I don’t think you’ll ever finish this but it was definitely an interesting read.
8/22/2017 c12 AK
Man it's been years but it would be incredible if you came back to this fic. Haven't read anything like it, and there's so much room for character and plot development. Really want to see Haya and Ahad come to an understanding- he's clearly not the bad guy here and they're such a spitfire couple.
Man it's been years but it would be incredible if you came back to this fic. Haven't read anything like it, and there's so much room for character and plot development. Really want to see Haya and Ahad come to an understanding- he's clearly not the bad guy here and they're such a spitfire couple.
6/8/2017 c12 Guest
I doubt you'll ever come to this but this was such an interesting read! I would loved to see how things turned out for Haya and if Ahad's mask ever came off but alas.
I doubt you'll ever come to this but this was such an interesting read! I would loved to see how things turned out for Haya and if Ahad's mask ever came off but alas.
1/5/2017 c1 Mohsin babar
Its my 3rd time reading this. Recommend it to everyone simply loved it every line
Its my 3rd time reading this. Recommend it to everyone simply loved it every line
12/7/2016 c12 Mouse bavar
Hoorie this book rocks.. i simply love it will u add more chapters.. Hoovi the great
Hoorie this book rocks.. i simply love it will u add more chapters.. Hoovi the great
12/30/2014 c9 AYKhan
Ahad is falling in love, I guess. :P
Ahad is falling in love, I guess. :P
11/11/2013 c12 Pink Bead Girl
I am really glad you have been able to add another chapter. I wonder what further miseries will plague poor Haya in Karachi. I am feeling sorry that she has to leave the safety of Aday's company. I look forward to reading some more when you can write a bit more. I liked this chapter, it was interesting with unanswered questions but it was too short, lol! Good luck with more writing.
best wishes,
PinkBeadGirl
I am really glad you have been able to add another chapter. I wonder what further miseries will plague poor Haya in Karachi. I am feeling sorry that she has to leave the safety of Aday's company. I look forward to reading some more when you can write a bit more. I liked this chapter, it was interesting with unanswered questions but it was too short, lol! Good luck with more writing.
best wishes,
PinkBeadGirl
4/20/2013 c11 Pink Bead Girl
I was sorry to read of your own personal grief regarding your grandmother, may her soul rest in peace.
I had tears in my eyes reading this chapter, it is so filled with raw emotion and it is just breathtakingly good to read your thoughts and be so moved. I hope that you will find comfort from your sorrow and that you will be able to continue to delight with your skill as a writer here. I thank you for sharing your talent with all here thusfar.
I was sorry to read of your own personal grief regarding your grandmother, may her soul rest in peace.
I had tears in my eyes reading this chapter, it is so filled with raw emotion and it is just breathtakingly good to read your thoughts and be so moved. I hope that you will find comfort from your sorrow and that you will be able to continue to delight with your skill as a writer here. I thank you for sharing your talent with all here thusfar.
4/20/2013 c10 Pink Bead Girl
This was so good! I am confused to the extreme with trying to work out the politics of who is the good guy and who is the bad guy here but it makes for riveting reading. I know I keep saying it but I love this story so much.
This was so good! I am confused to the extreme with trying to work out the politics of who is the good guy and who is the bad guy here but it makes for riveting reading. I know I keep saying it but I love this story so much.