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3/4/2017 c1 13Shailaputri
Was he her previous love or what?
1/3/2009 c1 10nul
Your summary ensnared me, I've never read one like this.

There were a few grammatical mistakes/typos/etc:

The first sentence, "I should be happy shouldn't I" you should insert a comma

between "happy" and "shouldn't". Like, "I should be happy, shouldn't I?"

Okay, I lied. Only one. :))

This was, I can't think of the right word I want to use.

I want to say depressing, but it really wasn't. That thought is, sort of.

But it's wonderful, the story is.

I kinda want to know the back story to this love triangle (?).

It seems intruiging.

But, beautiful. Really.

I loved it.

kthnxbai,

Martin the Waterskier
1/3/2009 c1 1Ganondorf The Dark Knight
I loved it. [:

The last sentence was perfect.
1/3/2009 c1 26i'm not dead yet
loved it

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