for God of Nothing1/11/2009 c1 
11The Cat Died Nobly
pres-ent tense! pres-ent tense! pres-ent tense!
lol k, done. who
although you didn't even tell me about it. i be hurt.
you better tell me whats going on ASAP
11The Cat Died Noblypres-ent tense! pres-ent tense! pres-ent tense!
lol k, done. who
although you didn't even tell me about it. i be hurt.
you better tell me whats going on ASAP
1/11/2009 c2 2Ray-Anne
Oh, intrigue of the new character.
I didn't think it was too fast, it was very nicely paced and the characters seem real and lively. I like it so far, keep it going.
2Ray-AnneOh, intrigue of the new character.
I didn't think it was too fast, it was very nicely paced and the characters seem real and lively. I like it so far, keep it going.
1/10/2009 c2 1With a K
I think your writing is just fine. A nice pace and isn't jam-packed with information, nor is there so little I don't know what's going on.
Interesting idea. I can't wait to see where you go with this. (:
1With a KI think your writing is just fine. A nice pace and isn't jam-packed with information, nor is there so little I don't know what's going on.
Interesting idea. I can't wait to see where you go with this. (:
1/10/2009 c2 xbrunnettex0
i like it soo far. i think ur giving us the right amount of info andkeeping it interesting. mark seems like an interesting character.
i like it soo far. i think ur giving us the right amount of info andkeeping it interesting. mark seems like an interesting character.
1/4/2009 c1 1Ganondorf The Dark Knight
This is excellent. [:
Update update update!
I read a story with a slightly similar dream person. Well, at least it sounds like it, but I haven't even met yours.
Anyway, that's beside the point, it was good, and never updated.
So you better update this one. D
Your writing is excellent. I already am liking the characters.
Can't wait to read more.
1Ganondorf The Dark KnightThis is excellent. [:
Update update update!
I read a story with a slightly similar dream person. Well, at least it sounds like it, but I haven't even met yours.
Anyway, that's beside the point, it was good, and never updated.
So you better update this one. D
Your writing is excellent. I already am liking the characters.
Can't wait to read more.