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3/8/2009 c1 50Golmere Verns
Great job, again. I loved the idea and you phrased it perfectly. Last line was amazing.

-Golmere
3/3/2009 c1 140Chidaruma Kamisori
I know that well.

We don't have words big enough for it yet.

-C.K.
1/7/2009 c1 166listen to what i've never said
Love it :)

Keep writing, because no one can stop you :)
1/6/2009 c1 62Kiwi-kiwi6
Oh, my word. This is amazing. The last line is my favorite. Good job.
1/6/2009 c1 50GirlWithTheBrokenSmile
Beautifully written, but I think that I would have left off the last two lines. It would just have a bigger BANG to me, I guess.

Whatever. PANCAKES!
1/5/2009 c1 Child of the Creatures
This is SO cute! ^.^

Your became such a good writer! *sniffs* I'm so proud! ^.^

Great Job Angel!
1/5/2009 c1 26Innocent Tears
I don't like reading free verse that often, but i like this. Great Job!

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