
1/8/2009 c1 Dewdrop.on.the.leaf
Hey... not bad. I'm a great fan of songfics myself. i like the way you weaved the lyrics into the story. A different style:)
Hey... not bad. I'm a great fan of songfics myself. i like the way you weaved the lyrics into the story. A different style:)
1/8/2009 c1
2ijelly
Wow! This is a pretty interesting story! You should continuing writing it. I really really really want to see (or read) what happens next ...

Wow! This is a pretty interesting story! You should continuing writing it. I really really really want to see (or read) what happens next ...
1/6/2009 c1
2DanBan.E
Wow, um. Amazing? No, that doesn't cover it... Hmm. Beautifully and creatively written? No... Stunningly adventurous and odd? Well, it's all of those things, and more. Honestly, this was... phenomenal. I'm tearing up from the... truth of it. It's weird, but everything makes sense. Great job.
Love, Dani

Wow, um. Amazing? No, that doesn't cover it... Hmm. Beautifully and creatively written? No... Stunningly adventurous and odd? Well, it's all of those things, and more. Honestly, this was... phenomenal. I'm tearing up from the... truth of it. It's weird, but everything makes sense. Great job.
Love, Dani
1/6/2009 c1 superficialSagacity
I loved how this story was so short and open-ended..
:D It made it more realistic and I really loved the mood.
That said, I would really love it if you could expand on this idea and sorta give more details by writing a complete story on it.
:D
I loved how this story was so short and open-ended..
:D It made it more realistic and I really loved the mood.
That said, I would really love it if you could expand on this idea and sorta give more details by writing a complete story on it.
:D
1/6/2009 c1
23Hypa To Hell And Back
:P I like this alot. It would be fun to have another chapter on top of this. It would be very funny.
I really like this alot.
Sorry kinda hypa on sugar. :P
Uber sweet this was. Very good
Thank you,
Naomi

:P I like this alot. It would be fun to have another chapter on top of this. It would be very funny.
I really like this alot.
Sorry kinda hypa on sugar. :P
Uber sweet this was. Very good
Thank you,
Naomi