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12/7/2010 c1 lymli
I like the repetition with the tic thing, I like the part about thinking clever and life being eternal since it's not.
5/31/2010 c1 10Vroooommmmmm
awesome poem...i m just like speechless
4/7/2010 c1 experiment101
Excellent, I miss having time to read your stuff so much. D:.
1/3/2010 c1 34Ashlee Pond
I love the idea for this poem, and the delivery is gorgeous.

Separating it into stanzas, or adding some punctuation, would have made it a touch easier to read.

But you've done a fantastic job with this piece.
1/2/2010 c1 8Luna Addictus
I actually like the repetition and the onomatopeia you did with the clock. And I also like the fact that you could rhyme. (cause I can't... I horribly fail at rhyming...)
12/8/2009 c1 119Whisper on the Lips
i like the repatiton of this and the poem is really awesome. great job!

in case you didn't know: shift + enter gets rid of the double spacing

write on!
10/25/2009 c1 989East-0f-Eden
great rhyme scheme!

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