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1/8/2009 c1 painted eyes
I thought this very sweet and heart-breaking. Really well put together, I loved the first line on the 2nd stanza.

One thing though, I don't think you need that final line, but should have left it at "and it isn't with you".

All in all good job, keep it up.

~painted

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