for Caught off Guard1/9/2009 c1 
3MarthMarie
Wow. That was great! This is my favourit sentance: "His body was shocked, finished, blood spewed out of his chest as his severed throat gasped for air it couldn’t quite reach." I just really like how you wrote it. Great story!
3MarthMarieWow. That was great! This is my favourit sentance: "His body was shocked, finished, blood spewed out of his chest as his severed throat gasped for air it couldn’t quite reach." I just really like how you wrote it. Great story!