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7/11/2003 c1 25slain-angel
Meh...not bad...not the best I've read. Pretty good. I guess it's just not my style, because I can't seem to find what is wrong with it...I just don't particularly like it...Sorry

*~ Slain Angel~*

Go ahead and read my stuff and tell me what you think...whether you like it or not...Sorry again for being so harsh...
4/25/2002 c1 55Fire of the Vampire
This is sweet! Very good. Keep up the good work!

God Bless

Much Love

Later Daze

- Kacie
4/12/2002 c1 nonamenonamenonameblah
Aww...*claps*
3/1/2002 c1 Meghanna Starsong
nice symbolism. very nice! ^_^
2/28/2002 c1 13CrystalInTheStates
Wow, this is original. Interesting, too.
2/20/2002 c1 63erisedilla
ok, I'm reviewing my own poem because I LOVE reviews... teeheehee... one of my personal fav's here... yeah... GREAT JOB SHELLY!
12/7/2001 c1 9rukimakino
Nice! Do U know who I am? I am da 1 and only rukimakino!(da person who was in mikae77's story) Hah! You write better poems than Mikae77! *laughs evilly and vanishes in a puff of GREEN smoke*

~Ruki
11/24/2001 c1 Phoenix Potter
Wow! that was an amazing poem with a lot of feeling. Keep it up!
11/23/2001 c1 Shamanzel
very medieval... i like it but not as much as the others... its also prose-ish and has an irregular rhyme... ah well... u can't have everything
4/22/2001 c1 Lindy
I liked how you related love to structure. It made the poem very worth reading. ;) The only thing that irked me were the first two lines, but they didn't even bother me that much. Great job!
4/22/2001 c1 kat
this should be a song. It would make a good love song.

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