for Castle D'Amour7/11/2003 c1 
25slain-angel
Meh...not bad...not the best I've read. Pretty good. I guess it's just not my style, because I can't seem to find what is wrong with it...I just don't particularly like it...Sorry
*~ Slain Angel~*
Go ahead and read my stuff and tell me what you think...whether you like it or not...Sorry again for being so harsh...
25slain-angelMeh...not bad...not the best I've read. Pretty good. I guess it's just not my style, because I can't seem to find what is wrong with it...I just don't particularly like it...Sorry
*~ Slain Angel~*
Go ahead and read my stuff and tell me what you think...whether you like it or not...Sorry again for being so harsh...
4/25/2002 c1 55Fire of the Vampire
This is sweet! Very good. Keep up the good work!
God Bless
Much Love
Later Daze
- Kacie
55Fire of the VampireThis is sweet! Very good. Keep up the good work!
God Bless
Much Love
Later Daze
- Kacie
2/20/2002 c1 63erisedilla
ok, I'm reviewing my own poem because I LOVE reviews... teeheehee... one of my personal fav's here... yeah... GREAT JOB SHELLY!
63erisedillaok, I'm reviewing my own poem because I LOVE reviews... teeheehee... one of my personal fav's here... yeah... GREAT JOB SHELLY!
12/7/2001 c1 9rukimakino
Nice! Do U know who I am? I am da 1 and only rukimakino!(da person who was in mikae77's story) Hah! You write better poems than Mikae77! *laughs evilly and vanishes in a puff of GREEN smoke*
~Ruki
9rukimakinoNice! Do U know who I am? I am da 1 and only rukimakino!(da person who was in mikae77's story) Hah! You write better poems than Mikae77! *laughs evilly and vanishes in a puff of GREEN smoke*
~Ruki
11/24/2001 c1 Phoenix Potter
Wow! that was an amazing poem with a lot of feeling. Keep it up!
Wow! that was an amazing poem with a lot of feeling. Keep it up!
11/23/2001 c1 Shamanzel
very medieval... i like it but not as much as the others... its also prose-ish and has an irregular rhyme... ah well... u can't have everything
very medieval... i like it but not as much as the others... its also prose-ish and has an irregular rhyme... ah well... u can't have everything
4/22/2001 c1 Lindy
I liked how you related love to structure. It made the poem very worth reading. ;) The only thing that irked me were the first two lines, but they didn't even bother me that much. Great job!
I liked how you related love to structure. It made the poem very worth reading. ;) The only thing that irked me were the first two lines, but they didn't even bother me that much. Great job!
4/22/2001 c1 kat
this should be a song. It would make a good love song.
this should be a song. It would make a good love song.