for Love Out Loud3/23/2009 c40 
31freakyAngel
First off, there are a lot of mistakes throughout the whole chapter. Missing words, wrong grammar, bad spelling, and there was once when you mixed up Tyler with Tony (C35: Anxiety). It confuses people, especially when they're engrossed in the story. Just throws people off, y'know?
Other than that, the story's great. I don't really understand Sarah's reasons for hating the Beckon Bros, though that's probably just me. But Jason's a good brother to Sarah, and his speech really was quite cool (the one he used on his friends so they'd help give Sarah a chance to talk to Nick). The plot's original enough, the characters are pretty funny, and the whole thing's generally quite sweet.
Looking forward to the sequel! :)
31freakyAngelFirst off, there are a lot of mistakes throughout the whole chapter. Missing words, wrong grammar, bad spelling, and there was once when you mixed up Tyler with Tony (C35: Anxiety). It confuses people, especially when they're engrossed in the story. Just throws people off, y'know?
Other than that, the story's great. I don't really understand Sarah's reasons for hating the Beckon Bros, though that's probably just me. But Jason's a good brother to Sarah, and his speech really was quite cool (the one he used on his friends so they'd help give Sarah a chance to talk to Nick). The plot's original enough, the characters are pretty funny, and the whole thing's generally quite sweet.
Looking forward to the sequel! :)
3/22/2009 c40 RedMae
Okay cant wait of the sequel i am going to miss reading this i love it and i hope there isnt any troubles for Sarah and Nick in he next one.
xobellajanexo
Okay cant wait of the sequel i am going to miss reading this i love it and i hope there isnt any troubles for Sarah and Nick in he next one.
xobellajanexo
3/22/2009 c40 14Sapphyre Nymph
congartulations on finally finishing your story.
it was great, but a little "bitin" in my language. that means, cliffhanger... haha..
anyway, continue writing, who knows, maybe you'll be getting a living out of this someday.
14Sapphyre Nymphcongartulations on finally finishing your story.
it was great, but a little "bitin" in my language. that means, cliffhanger... haha..
anyway, continue writing, who knows, maybe you'll be getting a living out of this someday.
3/22/2009 c40 3Kimmiesue
Good! I can't believe it is over :(
There better be a sequel!
I really want a sequel...
Please? :)
3KimmiesueGood! I can't believe it is over :(
There better be a sequel!
I really want a sequel...
Please? :)
3/22/2009 c40 OMG
hahaha a sequel! NO WAAY! SICK AND AWESOME!
hahaha a sequel! NO WAAY! SICK AND AWESOME!
3/21/2009 c39 Kirsten
I love this story. Please write more. =P
I love this story. Please write more. =P
3/20/2009 c39 ytfud
yay!
yay!
3/19/2009 c39 mellybelly91395
You have over 400 reviews now. Yay! Waah! This is so sad. This better be a happy epilouge though.
You have over 400 reviews now. Yay! Waah! This is so sad. This better be a happy epilouge though.
3/19/2009 c39 RedMae
OKAY AWESOME
I LOVED READING THIS
I HOPE YOU ENJOYED WRITING IT
YOU STUFF IS GOOD IM READING YOUR OTHERS
THIS IS MY LAST REVIEW SO CHERISH IT WITH YOUR LIFE
HAHA
LOVE YA LOVE LOVE OUT LOUD BYE
XOXOBELLAJANEXO
OKAY AWESOME
I LOVED READING THIS
I HOPE YOU ENJOYED WRITING IT
YOU STUFF IS GOOD IM READING YOUR OTHERS
THIS IS MY LAST REVIEW SO CHERISH IT WITH YOUR LIFE
HAHA
LOVE YA LOVE LOVE OUT LOUD BYE
XOXOBELLAJANEXO
3/19/2009 c39 6THEXXHOPELESSXXROMANTIC
aaw sad he's still leaving! well i hope the epilouge is happy :) update soon!
6THEXXHOPELESSXXROMANTICaaw sad he's still leaving! well i hope the epilouge is happy :) update soon!