for Grasping Reality12/22/2012 c1 LalalaPrincess
aww, I kinda like this book!
you have a nice way of writing x x x
aww, I kinda like this book!
you have a nice way of writing x x x
7/31/2012 c21 
1Kazu'sTsundere21
That was awesome :D i think there shoulda been more of Mark when he woke up though, beingall 'Ninjaaaa' and confusing the shit out of Harvey xD
1Kazu'sTsundere21That was awesome :D i think there shoulda been more of Mark when he woke up though, beingall 'Ninjaaaa' and confusing the shit out of Harvey xD
5/23/2012 c21 1MissKukyMonster
Hahaha that story was super awesome! I'm still chuckling as I write this XD I really enjoyed the random sections, I normally wouldn't but you really made them fit. Thanks for sharing it!
1MissKukyMonsterHahaha that story was super awesome! I'm still chuckling as I write this XD I really enjoyed the random sections, I normally wouldn't but you really made them fit. Thanks for sharing it!
4/5/2012 c21 Water Lily 123
OMG best story ever! I was cracking up for five minutes strait at some parts, and really sad at others. I would've killed you guys if you made Harvey gay, but you didn't! Happy endings! Yayayayayayay!
OMG best story ever! I was cracking up for five minutes strait at some parts, and really sad at others. I would've killed you guys if you made Harvey gay, but you didn't! Happy endings! Yayayayayayay!
10/28/2011 c21 20RomanceSucka007
Wow, the randomness of this story was kinda... refreshing. :3
I loved this, nicely written!
"Alicia…" Harvey gazed deeply into my eyes. "I'm gay."
OMG, that just made me die laughing. XD Right before I took a second look, and went, "OMFG, REALLY?"
I loved this! Thank you so much for writing it! :)
20RomanceSucka007Wow, the randomness of this story was kinda... refreshing. :3
I loved this, nicely written!
"Alicia…" Harvey gazed deeply into my eyes. "I'm gay."
OMG, that just made me die laughing. XD Right before I took a second look, and went, "OMFG, REALLY?"
I loved this! Thank you so much for writing it! :)
5/24/2011 c21 t.med
wowwww... i'm dumbstruck.
you guys are epic, but extremely random :D Just, try not to go overboard, some of those dreams got a tad ridiculous... I loved the twist of Mark being the white ninja though.
i'll be checking out your other stuff ;)
med
wowwww... i'm dumbstruck.
you guys are epic, but extremely random :D Just, try not to go overboard, some of those dreams got a tad ridiculous... I loved the twist of Mark being the white ninja though.
i'll be checking out your other stuff ;)
med
3/8/2011 c21 1An.Imperfect.Circle
Awesome :) Loved the ninja, the whole story shouldve been bout him XD Great story :)
1An.Imperfect.CircleAwesome :) Loved the ninja, the whole story shouldve been bout him XD Great story :)
10/24/2010 c12 layger
LOL
that was HIARIOUS!
LOL
that was HIARIOUS!
10/21/2010 c1 Mai
Needs more, but other wise it's good!
Needs more, but other wise it's good!
10/19/2010 c21 Alice Silverglow
the end? THE END? NO! =( THE PAIN! THE TORTURE! BUT... nice story! loved it, although it was a bIT to random for me. =/ so yeah... BOO! its over... the end...*cry! weep! sigh!*
the end? THE END? NO! =( THE PAIN! THE TORTURE! BUT... nice story! loved it, although it was a bIT to random for me. =/ so yeah... BOO! its over... the end...*cry! weep! sigh!*
10/19/2010 c20 Alice Silverglow
NO! no, no, no, NO, NO ,NO, NO , NO! i like mr.peterson though... NO HARVEY!
NO! no, no, no, NO, NO ,NO, NO , NO! i like mr.peterson though... NO HARVEY!
10/19/2010 c19 Alice Silverglow
ahh, poor Mark...Poor Alicia even though it isn't here fault and she blames herself so maybe I should continue saying Poord Alicia...Poor Harvey... Poor WHITE NIJA! even though thats mark and i already said mark.
ahh, poor Mark...Poor Alicia even though it isn't here fault and she blames herself so maybe I should continue saying Poord Alicia...Poor Harvey... Poor WHITE NIJA! even though thats mark and i already said mark.
10/19/2010 c18 Alice Silverglow
no offense but that chapter was kind of boring. why can't Alicia ever mind her own business and stop lying? Poor harvey... i think i've known for a while...
no offense but that chapter was kind of boring. why can't Alicia ever mind her own business and stop lying? Poor harvey... i think i've known for a while...