9/28/2009 c19 Joe
...I think I forgot my password. I dunno, not gonna log in.
Anyways, drama. Tis there. Wonder how this is supposed to end out. Yesh. Er. I r retarded right now. Lack of sleep = bad.
...Yeah. Hurry up and finish it already. Oh. And, plot... bunnies?
...I think I forgot my password. I dunno, not gonna log in.
Anyways, drama. Tis there. Wonder how this is supposed to end out. Yesh. Er. I r retarded right now. Lack of sleep = bad.
...Yeah. Hurry up and finish it already. Oh. And, plot... bunnies?
9/26/2009 c1 Red Deer
Wow...This story is just amazing! I really love it! So PLEASE write more! I so want to find out what happens!
Wow...This story is just amazing! I really love it! So PLEASE write more! I so want to find out what happens!
9/25/2009 c19 Lovetrain
YEY UPDATE!
Loved this chapter, even though it was angsty. D:
Please update soon yeah :X
YEY UPDATE!
Loved this chapter, even though it was angsty. D:
Please update soon yeah :X
9/24/2009 c14 KC-86
LOL I love the toilet scene. You've given me a lot of inspiration! :) I'm a goon at romantic scenes and now I've learnt a lot! XD
Still, it's a great story! Keep up the good work!
LOL I love the toilet scene. You've given me a lot of inspiration! :) I'm a goon at romantic scenes and now I've learnt a lot! XD
Still, it's a great story! Keep up the good work!
9/23/2009 c19 3The one and only Chibs
AH OMG YOUR MAKING A SEQUEL TO Nothing Says I Love You More Than Slavery? OMG I AM SO READING IT! YAY forgive me i am eggsited!
AH OMG YOUR MAKING A SEQUEL TO Nothing Says I Love You More Than Slavery? OMG I AM SO READING IT! YAY forgive me i am eggsited!
9/22/2009 c18 3TheSparkleGeneration
I forgot how awesome this thing is o_o We should definately finish it soon.
I forgot how awesome this thing is o_o We should definately finish it soon.
9/20/2009 c18 anonymous
your story is hilarious. however, may i just make one friendly suggestion? the proper way to say that someone is in a coma for a prolonged period of time is not to say "in a state of comatose", but to say "in a comatose state" or "in a coma". love the writing, keep up the good work!
your story is hilarious. however, may i just make one friendly suggestion? the proper way to say that someone is in a coma for a prolonged period of time is not to say "in a state of comatose", but to say "in a comatose state" or "in a coma". love the writing, keep up the good work!
9/13/2009 c14 4Loyal2rock
Sorry that I haven't reviewed the other chapters, I was going to wait to the end! But this one is so f'n hilarious!
Sorry that I haven't reviewed the other chapters, I was going to wait to the end! But this one is so f'n hilarious!
9/13/2009 c8 P
LOVED the dream! It was awesome XD
LOVED the dream! It was awesome XD
9/13/2009 c18 Lovetrain
Hey, omg!
I started reading the first chapter just now and I couldn't stop!
Omg, this is so awesome.
When I heard about the Mark Wolfe thing, I also felt something familiar xD
Anyways Alicia and Harvey = Cuteness
Update soon please!
Hey, omg!
I started reading the first chapter just now and I couldn't stop!
Omg, this is so awesome.
When I heard about the Mark Wolfe thing, I also felt something familiar xD
Anyways Alicia and Harvey = Cuteness
Update soon please!
9/12/2009 c1 3TheSparkleGeneration
To Nano: They know. That's why they did it. Its supposed to be a comedy :)
To Nano: They know. That's why they did it. Its supposed to be a comedy :)
7/24/2009 c8 Nano
Why is the old lady wearing a kimono, speaking Korean and then offering her a fortune cookie?
A kimono is Japanese
An a fortune cookie is normally associated with Chinese food.
And obviously the Korean language is from Korea.
I know it was a dream, but seriously?
Try not to mix your cultures, you could end up offending people.
Otherwise a fairly hilarious dream.
Why is the old lady wearing a kimono, speaking Korean and then offering her a fortune cookie?
A kimono is Japanese
An a fortune cookie is normally associated with Chinese food.
And obviously the Korean language is from Korea.
I know it was a dream, but seriously?
Try not to mix your cultures, you could end up offending people.
Otherwise a fairly hilarious dream.
6/22/2009 c10 Marie Charlotte
Maybe Alicia's mom can't mess up noodles, but my school sure can...Ew.
Anyways...AWESOMELY FUNNY!
Maybe Alicia's mom can't mess up noodles, but my school sure can...Ew.
Anyways...AWESOMELY FUNNY!