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for The Eye of Her Storm

4/27/2009 c1 Waging Wonder
Stunning, I must say.

"Lie forgotten on the bottom of an ocean of lead" and "The path of the familiar over the path of the brazen" both lines that really grabbed me.

I suck at poetry so I am always amazed when people can do it really well, as you can.

I'll admit, I had something completely different in mind when reading the summary.

Excellent job.
1/10/2009 c1 8xxoh-the-possibilitiesxx
I really liked this. I liked the overall premise, but especially the line "Lie forgotten on the bottom of an ocean of lead." It creates a great image. Keep writing :)
1/10/2009 c1 1Katy Lynn
I absoultey love this poem!

It was really good, and it captured my attention at once.

I love your style of writing. :]

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