for Inexperienced Dead3/27/2009 c4 
1xxRainbowGirlxx
Ha! I really like Jay! He's so cool! How the hell is she gonna communicate with 'the powers that be'? lol please don't leave so long between updates! I'd almost forgotten you!
xXDawnieXx
1xxRainbowGirlxxHa! I really like Jay! He's so cool! How the hell is she gonna communicate with 'the powers that be'? lol please don't leave so long between updates! I'd almost forgotten you!
xXDawnieXx
3/26/2009 c2 MKensington
I don't know if you intended it or not, but I liked the way it read almost like a journal. (I only had time to read the first two chapters, but I will read the rest the next time I am on). The only thing I would have suggested was more dialogue, but I liked it the way it was anyways.
I don't know if you intended it or not, but I liked the way it read almost like a journal. (I only had time to read the first two chapters, but I will read the rest the next time I am on). The only thing I would have suggested was more dialogue, but I liked it the way it was anyways.
3/26/2009 c4 5RebeccaAlice
Jay makes me LOL. He really is so much like you, it's uncanny. I think you need to write the next chapter now, yeah? Yeah (Y)
5RebeccaAliceJay makes me LOL. He really is so much like you, it's uncanny. I think you need to write the next chapter now, yeah? Yeah (Y)
1/23/2009 c3 1xxRainbowGirlxx
This is great! Only complaint is that the chapters are too short! I want more! I'm not so good with the whole patience and suspense thing! lol Update doon!
xX Dawnie Xx
1xxRainbowGirlxxThis is great! Only complaint is that the chapters are too short! I want more! I'm not so good with the whole patience and suspense thing! lol Update doon!
xX Dawnie Xx
1/22/2009 c3 5RebeccaAlice
Jay reminds me of you. You so love Jay Brannan :P
Write chapter four, like, now. Good boy.
5RebeccaAliceJay reminds me of you. You so love Jay Brannan :P
Write chapter four, like, now. Good boy.
1/12/2009 c2 RebeccaAlice
Next one, please! I like it, I do.
I like Jay. I wonder where the name came from, eh? :P
Next one, please! I like it, I do.
I like Jay. I wonder where the name came from, eh? :P