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Where's the rest? :O
Where's the rest? :O
12/27/2010 c13 
1dharleiin28
omg! i love it! please please please update! i really want to know what happens after the "incident"
1dharleiin28omg! i love it! please please please update! i really want to know what happens after the "incident"
4/30/2010 c13 Take-Me-Away-To-Paradise
Hey, just wanted to say I really liked your story here, and I look forward to updates. I know how writers block can be since I've had it for years. Bt here's to hoping you have more ideas for this story soon!
Hey, just wanted to say I really liked your story here, and I look forward to updates. I know how writers block can be since I've had it for years. Bt here's to hoping you have more ideas for this story soon!
1/11/2010 c13 notyourbiz
damn this is really amazing. I'm getting butterflies in my tummy like every five seconds. Update soon,kay? :D I subscribed
damn this is really amazing. I'm getting butterflies in my tummy like every five seconds. Update soon,kay? :D I subscribed
12/9/2009 c5 teardropsONroses
okay somewhere in the middle here you switch from Jasmine to Aiden without saying it. needs a divider or a note or something
okay somewhere in the middle here you switch from Jasmine to Aiden without saying it. needs a divider or a note or something
12/9/2009 c4 teardropsONroses
ok so are they in Viginia or Florida.
cause they're both in here and it's confuzzling
ok so are they in Viginia or Florida.
cause they're both in here and it's confuzzling
12/1/2009 c13 3DarlingMiley
Omg ... Wow.
Yesh incest can be gross but ... It's kinda cute ... epp. Please write more on this story. I'm about to read your other one, you have a gift for writing I look forward to reading more! Keep up the great work!
3DarlingMileyOmg ... Wow.
Yesh incest can be gross but ... It's kinda cute ... epp. Please write more on this story. I'm about to read your other one, you have a gift for writing I look forward to reading more! Keep up the great work!