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1/28/2009 c1 232Second Hand Screams
This reminds me of a homeless man I saw in Philly once. He was sitting on the sidewalk listening to a little radio pressed to his ear and just nodding along to it. Maybe that really was what he was thinking about?
1/12/2009 c1 Isca
I love it when a poet uses kenning! :) "Balloon-pants," "Fist-hipped," and "Roof-tops."

Oh my! The second stanza is so profound! He wonders what it would feel like to hold female radio waves in his hands. WOW! That's fascinating! Kudos for being so creative!

You're very talented!

-Isca
1/12/2009 c1 13evm
So I hate to be one of those annoying reviewers who leave it at "gee, I like that line that way you wrote it good job." But. Yeah. I loved "Fist-hipped with roof-top lips/ he's convinced radio siganls are female."

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