for Ahh, Canadian Love3/5/2010 c1 
10balloonfista
Oh, me loves!
Nathan's awesome :)
it was such a lot of fun reading his side of view
Ri
10balloonfistaOh, me loves!
Nathan's awesome :)
it was such a lot of fun reading his side of view
Ri
3/2/2010 c1 Genato
i loved this! really! I love how the guy was really possessive, but in a funny way - not the usual vampire stories where the hot vampire stakes his claim and shizz.
i like how he can't keep his mouth shut around her, how the james' dude was deliberately teasing them. i like the girl's reactions to what he's saying. so fluffy and cliche but it's cool. an di like those intreseting phrases you use as your narrative. :) keep it up, deena! :)
i loved this! really! I love how the guy was really possessive, but in a funny way - not the usual vampire stories where the hot vampire stakes his claim and shizz.
i like how he can't keep his mouth shut around her, how the james' dude was deliberately teasing them. i like the girl's reactions to what he's saying. so fluffy and cliche but it's cool. an di like those intreseting phrases you use as your narrative. :) keep it up, deena! :)
2/14/2010 c1 LehCarXRachel
This story is so cute! ^^
Its funny and cute how he blabbs about random things xD.
"I wouldn’t mind watching you sunbathe," hahah
This story is so cute! ^^
Its funny and cute how he blabbs about random things xD.
"I wouldn’t mind watching you sunbathe," hahah
8/29/2009 c1 9WinMyHeart5444
Awh! Haha, I love how big ofa dufus the main character was, he was so sweet it was funny. :D Really amazing job, I loved it very much, thank you for writing it!
9WinMyHeart5444Awh! Haha, I love how big ofa dufus the main character was, he was so sweet it was funny. :D Really amazing job, I loved it very much, thank you for writing it!
7/6/2009 c1 5Pauliuris
Hi!
Well I'm just passing through to tell you I really liked this one shot. I loved the way Nathan's thoughts were written.
Still, if a guy talked to me like that I'd seriously think he was a freak xD
It was a really cute story and it reminded me a lot of the year I spent in Winnipeg, Canada )we reached -50 celcius once)
It's also great to find an adult author on fictionpress (I mean a real adult, not 18 year old young adults :P)
Keep up the good work!
5PauliurisHi!
Well I'm just passing through to tell you I really liked this one shot. I loved the way Nathan's thoughts were written.
Still, if a guy talked to me like that I'd seriously think he was a freak xD
It was a really cute story and it reminded me a lot of the year I spent in Winnipeg, Canada )we reached -50 celcius once)
It's also great to find an adult author on fictionpress (I mean a real adult, not 18 year old young adults :P)
Keep up the good work!
5/17/2009 c1 the illiterate
aww sweet .
i love hiring a hooligan by the way. Favourite story on FP thus far.
aww sweet .
i love hiring a hooligan by the way. Favourite story on FP thus far.
5/8/2009 c1 alwaysautumn
Bhaha-haha.. sorry but Bimla’s Chutney ...haha *tears of laughter*
Anywhos~ awesome story ;) Very uncliche-like. T'was cute.
Everything I like in a oneshot... except that maybe that it was a oneshot. I guess it's like they say, 'all good things come to an end', and all that jazz.
keep it real,
x reeka
Bhaha-haha.. sorry but Bimla’s Chutney ...haha *tears of laughter*
Anywhos~ awesome story ;) Very uncliche-like. T'was cute.
Everything I like in a oneshot... except that maybe that it was a oneshot. I guess it's like they say, 'all good things come to an end', and all that jazz.
keep it real,
x reeka
4/15/2009 c1 MiniFeverency
This story is so cute. And HELLZ YEAH! to the happy dance such and such. ;]
This story is so cute. And HELLZ YEAH! to the happy dance such and such. ;]
3/18/2009 c1 5annoyance
Loved your story! Are you Indian? coz you said you were hindu.
Just wondering, coz i am too :)
5annoyanceLoved your story! Are you Indian? coz you said you were hindu.
Just wondering, coz i am too :)
3/16/2009 c1 Maddye
gahh! your stuff is soo good
thank you for finishing 'Hiring a Hooligan' - it was one of the first stories i read on fp and i revisited it a couple of days ago and was happily surprised to find it finished (id thought youd given up on it) =]
anyhow, i hope you continue to write and i will check out Lucan's story soon (probably in the holidays cos reading is kinda distracting me from school..)
keep up the good work!
gahh! your stuff is soo good
thank you for finishing 'Hiring a Hooligan' - it was one of the first stories i read on fp and i revisited it a couple of days ago and was happily surprised to find it finished (id thought youd given up on it) =]
anyhow, i hope you continue to write and i will check out Lucan's story soon (probably in the holidays cos reading is kinda distracting me from school..)
keep up the good work!
3/12/2009 c1 LondonLi
I don't have a clue how I missed this, but I'm so glad you're posting again! My sister just got married, so enough said there! Great job; this guy is beyond adorable; I want some one to ramble on and on to me like that!
I don't have a clue how I missed this, but I'm so glad you're posting again! My sister just got married, so enough said there! Great job; this guy is beyond adorable; I want some one to ramble on and on to me like that!
2/2/2009 c1 quester.birdgmail.com
You're like...mah hero? (I'd say heroine but it's totally boundless to be taken the wrong way.
You're like...mah hero? (I'd say heroine but it's totally boundless to be taken the wrong way.