for Singer2/14/2010 c22 
13morphine and lollipops
:D Marker. I liked this, will finish reading it. Stopped halfway through CH21.
13morphine and lollipops:D Marker. I liked this, will finish reading it. Stopped halfway through CH21.
2/8/2010 c42 3Duuude
hey!
plenty of bad things happen here!
lol.
I suppose I should be happy Rachel thinks Canada's that safe... as unrealistic as it is.
I don't think I can finish reading this... it's so long. haha.
It's probably because the chapter's are really short. I have to read like a billion each day to ever finish it. Cause if I stop reading it even for one day, I'll forget all about it.
My memory's that bad.
D:
Anyway, lovely story. I love Rachel. :)
3Duuudehey!
plenty of bad things happen here!
lol.
I suppose I should be happy Rachel thinks Canada's that safe... as unrealistic as it is.
I don't think I can finish reading this... it's so long. haha.
It's probably because the chapter's are really short. I have to read like a billion each day to ever finish it. Cause if I stop reading it even for one day, I'll forget all about it.
My memory's that bad.
D:
Anyway, lovely story. I love Rachel. :)
2/4/2010 c1 Disappointed
I was really looking forward to reading a good fem-slash story and seeing as this story had a ton of reviews, I thought that there must be something good about it. Unfortunately, what I got was a cliche plot with one-dimensional characters and a poorly executed idea. Your writing isn't horrible, you at least have a hold on basic grammar, but the execution of your ideas just slaughter any quality this story may have held.
I don't know how this story is doing so well.
You're just not that great of a writer.
I was really looking forward to reading a good fem-slash story and seeing as this story had a ton of reviews, I thought that there must be something good about it. Unfortunately, what I got was a cliche plot with one-dimensional characters and a poorly executed idea. Your writing isn't horrible, you at least have a hold on basic grammar, but the execution of your ideas just slaughter any quality this story may have held.
I don't know how this story is doing so well.
You're just not that great of a writer.
1/28/2010 c80 SCHATZI87
I read the whole story, i absolutely loved the entire story. i love the character and i think that Jesse & Rachel are a good couple & I hope they get back together. I really like Rachel cuz she is so unique. I can't wait to see what happens in *Onegirl* I'll definitely be waiting thank you for sharing a part of yourself by writing this cuz guess what you have fans and people who care about you and your characters keep it up. :D
I read the whole story, i absolutely loved the entire story. i love the character and i think that Jesse & Rachel are a good couple & I hope they get back together. I really like Rachel cuz she is so unique. I can't wait to see what happens in *Onegirl* I'll definitely be waiting thank you for sharing a part of yourself by writing this cuz guess what you have fans and people who care about you and your characters keep it up. :D
1/25/2010 c80 1CrookedSmiles
i'll have to admit, i was close to tears by the end of this.
it's so good. i can't even quite put it into words.
1CrookedSmilesi'll have to admit, i was close to tears by the end of this.
it's so good. i can't even quite put it into words.
1/2/2010 c1 Nasu
Jeez. I've been stalking this story since what? Since when you only had 20th chapters up? I'm pretty sure I was the 100th review, too. It's been a while..I enjoyed this story so much, and will definitely be reading the sequel. You'd better finish it or I'll send angry butterflies and Koalas after you. ;D Cheers.
Jeez. I've been stalking this story since what? Since when you only had 20th chapters up? I'm pretty sure I was the 100th review, too. It's been a while..I enjoyed this story so much, and will definitely be reading the sequel. You'd better finish it or I'll send angry butterflies and Koalas after you. ;D Cheers.
12/31/2009 c80 Lav
First of all, I wish you a happy-happy new year n_n I'm sorry for the grammatic errors, English is not my lenguage.. Im a latin-little-shy person who fell in love with your story -the last one that I read this year-. I found it just this week, and, well, just couldn't stop reading and adoring Rachel and her sarcasm, her strenght, her love for the music -I imagine her singing You Spin me Round and go crazy-! And the last thing she said, when Jessica called her, moved me to tears! You created beautiful, inteligent and unique characters! Thomas and Jenny are wow! Thomas is my favorite, behind Rachel of course.. And I can't help to hate Jessica! I half understood her, but she broke Rachel's heart! That I can't forgive TOT I have so much to say, but I don't find the words TOT -as I said, I don't have a phd in English T_T I will be waiting impatiently for OneGirl, I know I won't get tired of Rachel and her harem -I want more of them!-, and Im planning of reading Singer again. It's worth it! I thank-congratulate you for doing such a great story! n_n
First of all, I wish you a happy-happy new year n_n I'm sorry for the grammatic errors, English is not my lenguage.. Im a latin-little-shy person who fell in love with your story -the last one that I read this year-. I found it just this week, and, well, just couldn't stop reading and adoring Rachel and her sarcasm, her strenght, her love for the music -I imagine her singing You Spin me Round and go crazy-! And the last thing she said, when Jessica called her, moved me to tears! You created beautiful, inteligent and unique characters! Thomas and Jenny are wow! Thomas is my favorite, behind Rachel of course.. And I can't help to hate Jessica! I half understood her, but she broke Rachel's heart! That I can't forgive TOT I have so much to say, but I don't find the words TOT -as I said, I don't have a phd in English T_T I will be waiting impatiently for OneGirl, I know I won't get tired of Rachel and her harem -I want more of them!-, and Im planning of reading Singer again. It's worth it! I thank-congratulate you for doing such a great story! n_n
12/26/2009 c80 QQ
Awesome, this is a very nicely done story. It's definitely one of the best stories on FicPress and probably even better than some published stories.
The ending is just, wow, realistic, dramatic, and just the right amount to hang us readers to read the sequel. Thanks for posting it up.
Awesome, this is a very nicely done story. It's definitely one of the best stories on FicPress and probably even better than some published stories.
The ending is just, wow, realistic, dramatic, and just the right amount to hang us readers to read the sequel. Thanks for posting it up.
12/22/2009 c80 Brenda Agaro
Just when I finally got the chance to catch up, I find that the story has already ended. D:
The recent chapters were full of emotions. I like how you conveyed them. So sad that they broke up, but it felt realistic and I give you props for the realism. I was honestly mad at Jessie for what she did. The ending was done well in my personal opinion. It was open and show that not all problems can be solved right away in real life.
As a native Spanish speaker, I believe that your translations are correct. The word for "fag", however, could be "maricon." But I think that's from Spain (I'm from Puerto Rico, where we speak Carribean/Latin American Spanish.) I'm not a professional Spanish teacher, though. :X
One thing that I do have to point out is that at times during the dialogue there's too many tags, even in chapter 69. When it's between two people, tag the first two lines and the rest without them, until there's a new action or another character appears.
There were also a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing major. I'm impressed with your writing style and I'll read your other stories (especially the werewolf one! 8D ) when I get the chance.
Just when I finally got the chance to catch up, I find that the story has already ended. D:
The recent chapters were full of emotions. I like how you conveyed them. So sad that they broke up, but it felt realistic and I give you props for the realism. I was honestly mad at Jessie for what she did. The ending was done well in my personal opinion. It was open and show that not all problems can be solved right away in real life.
As a native Spanish speaker, I believe that your translations are correct. The word for "fag", however, could be "maricon." But I think that's from Spain (I'm from Puerto Rico, where we speak Carribean/Latin American Spanish.) I'm not a professional Spanish teacher, though. :X
One thing that I do have to point out is that at times during the dialogue there's too many tags, even in chapter 69. When it's between two people, tag the first two lines and the rest without them, until there's a new action or another character appears.
There were also a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing major. I'm impressed with your writing style and I'll read your other stories (especially the werewolf one! 8D ) when I get the chance.
12/19/2009 c80 12Amanandia
First of all - WTFMAJORTIMESKIPOMG. O_O
Second - DUDE. YOU KILLED ME. I saw it coming, but man, you made poor Rachel SUFFER. D8
Third - *claps for finishing teh multichap work*
Fourth - ZOMGCAN'TWAITFORSEQUEL. O_O *stalks*
... I'm not gonna bother continuing with the numbers. It's annoying me. xD BUT, I seriously will be stalking -yes, stalking- FP. xD
Oh, and, hey Rachel? I adopted one of your phrases. "Damn it to hell and back in a fucking hand-basket" has become a phrase I say when I am very, very pissed off. xD
Psst, Rachel, good luck getting Jessie back. :D (Even though we all know she'll come around. xD)
E! *squeals* Seriously, these two characters (And Rox, Thomas, and Jenny) have all become practically real in my head. Great job on that. xD I love when that happens. Especially when I can imagine accents, which I usually can't. xD
12AmanandiaFirst of all - WTFMAJORTIMESKIPOMG. O_O
Second - DUDE. YOU KILLED ME. I saw it coming, but man, you made poor Rachel SUFFER. D8
Third - *claps for finishing teh multichap work*
Fourth - ZOMGCAN'TWAITFORSEQUEL. O_O *stalks*
... I'm not gonna bother continuing with the numbers. It's annoying me. xD BUT, I seriously will be stalking -yes, stalking- FP. xD
Oh, and, hey Rachel? I adopted one of your phrases. "Damn it to hell and back in a fucking hand-basket" has become a phrase I say when I am very, very pissed off. xD
Psst, Rachel, good luck getting Jessie back. :D (Even though we all know she'll come around. xD)
E! *squeals* Seriously, these two characters (And Rox, Thomas, and Jenny) have all become practically real in my head. Great job on that. xD I love when that happens. Especially when I can imagine accents, which I usually can't. xD
12/18/2009 c80 42RandoMaia
Whoa! Hot shit, congratulations! I don't know where I'll go for my lesbian fluff fic now! This is highly distressing. I demand more.
42RandoMaiaWhoa! Hot shit, congratulations! I don't know where I'll go for my lesbian fluff fic now! This is highly distressing. I demand more.
12/18/2009 c80 7gaia-x-goddess
...*prays for more*... scrolls down... damn! :P Please put an alert up on here when you start OneGirl, because I don't want to miss it. This was amazing xx
7gaia-x-goddess...*prays for more*... scrolls down... damn! :P Please put an alert up on here when you start OneGirl, because I don't want to miss it. This was amazing xx
12/18/2009 c80 12MBaxter
Wow, love the ending. It's going to be murder waiting for the sequel to start!
Baxter
12MBaxterWow, love the ending. It's going to be murder waiting for the sequel to start!
Baxter
12/18/2009 c80 28Dust Errant
And so it's finally ended. Definitely looking forward to the sequel, but I feel content how this ended. I REALLY would love you to start the next chapter with Rachel's reaction to the phone call, cause we all KNOW she definitely wouldn't be as calm as she sounds on the phone here :P.
And Congrats on finishing your first multi-chapter fic! Took a little less then a year, but you finished!
28Dust ErrantAnd so it's finally ended. Definitely looking forward to the sequel, but I feel content how this ended. I REALLY would love you to start the next chapter with Rachel's reaction to the phone call, cause we all KNOW she definitely wouldn't be as calm as she sounds on the phone here :P.
And Congrats on finishing your first multi-chapter fic! Took a little less then a year, but you finished!