for Singer7/20/2015 c80 Grand Witch Alliance
I loved most of this story. Between this story and what I've read of what you uploaded for Onegirl so far, I liked this more, but only because it was more lighthearted and dealt less with being depressed overall. The only slight problem I found with it was the way the relationship progressed so quickly, which was actually pointed out in Onegirl. It was like they went from enemies to sort of friends to lovers all in the span of a week or something. I could understand the enemies to friends thing but making the jump to liking each other seemed a bit far-fetched.
I loved most of this story. Between this story and what I've read of what you uploaded for Onegirl so far, I liked this more, but only because it was more lighthearted and dealt less with being depressed overall. The only slight problem I found with it was the way the relationship progressed so quickly, which was actually pointed out in Onegirl. It was like they went from enemies to sort of friends to lovers all in the span of a week or something. I could understand the enemies to friends thing but making the jump to liking each other seemed a bit far-fetched.
6/4/2015 c11 BiKiran
but they discontinued it *sobs* i have two bottles sitting in my fridge... they expired years ago but i still lug them around with me from apartment to apartment... stupidly sentimental i guess lol
but they discontinued it *sobs* i have two bottles sitting in my fridge... they expired years ago but i still lug them around with me from apartment to apartment... stupidly sentimental i guess lol
3/14/2015 c80 KookieMastahArt
WHY? WHY YOU LEAVE ME SO SAD? You don't even know how many tears are falling down my face right now, I love this story so much. I never would have guessed it would end like this, amazing storytelling Tah! I am the type of person who you would never be able to find with a book at all, yet I managed to finish this story (and starting the next!)! Anyways, basically to summarise I just want to tell you how much I love this story. There's no words to express!
WHY? WHY YOU LEAVE ME SO SAD? You don't even know how many tears are falling down my face right now, I love this story so much. I never would have guessed it would end like this, amazing storytelling Tah! I am the type of person who you would never be able to find with a book at all, yet I managed to finish this story (and starting the next!)! Anyways, basically to summarise I just want to tell you how much I love this story. There's no words to express!
8/26/2014 c79 randomwolfie
That was amazing! I loved it. I cried, i laughed not only did that story inspire me but it alsi helped me deal with my own issues. Please continue to write stories, you have an amazing gift and dont let anyone tell you otherwise. I look forward to reading the sequel. Thanks again for such an amazing story.
Random Wolfie
That was amazing! I loved it. I cried, i laughed not only did that story inspire me but it alsi helped me deal with my own issues. Please continue to write stories, you have an amazing gift and dont let anyone tell you otherwise. I look forward to reading the sequel. Thanks again for such an amazing story.
Random Wolfie
8/12/2014 c2 JimbabweK88
Damn. This story is pretty cool. It's only the first chapter, but I like Rachel. Also, Jessica has quite a hand on her to knock Rachel to the ground with her slap!
Damn. This story is pretty cool. It's only the first chapter, but I like Rachel. Also, Jessica has quite a hand on her to knock Rachel to the ground with her slap!
8/6/2014 c80 randomwolfie
Ive fallen in love with your characters and the story...i literally binge read this in 3 days! Please, im begging you as a huge fan to your work finish the sequel. Thank you for writing such an amazing story hope to read more
random wolfie
Ive fallen in love with your characters and the story...i literally binge read this in 3 days! Please, im begging you as a huge fan to your work finish the sequel. Thank you for writing such an amazing story hope to read more
random wolfie
7/23/2014 c11 Guest
I absolutely love how the relationship is developing. Its so real. So rare on thissite. Ty for the eentertaining story
I absolutely love how the relationship is developing. Its so real. So rare on thissite. Ty for the eentertaining story
5/29/2014 c80 Guest
Hey...its the second time i read this and guess what? I found it amazing great..really...it is.
plzz continue the "one girl" you wrote and i mean the other sequel for this one.
thx...great story.
Hey...its the second time i read this and guess what? I found it amazing great..really...it is.
plzz continue the "one girl" you wrote and i mean the other sequel for this one.
thx...great story.
4/14/2014 c21 The Fabulous Killjoy
Oh, Lord, at the beginning of this chapter, with the tuner? I know that feel so hard... except I don't use a tuner unless it's the one built into the pickups of my nylon-string. Such a good story so far, love it! Absolutely fantastic
Oh, Lord, at the beginning of this chapter, with the tuner? I know that feel so hard... except I don't use a tuner unless it's the one built into the pickups of my nylon-string. Such a good story so far, love it! Absolutely fantastic
4/7/2014 c1 BlackCat3978
Just finished reading Singer and OneGirl this weekend after discovering it last week, and I must say it is one of the better works of fiction I've read in a while, including those I've purchased on Amazon and other sites. I hope you continue with Rachael and Jessie's story.
Just finished reading Singer and OneGirl this weekend after discovering it last week, and I must say it is one of the better works of fiction I've read in a while, including those I've purchased on Amazon and other sites. I hope you continue with Rachael and Jessie's story.
3/24/2014 c80 Guest
That was complete awesome...really really really great story.
I've enjoyed it alot.i just wish there were more at the end about their continue it in anogher story.
That was complete awesome...really really really great story.
I've enjoyed it alot.i just wish there were more at the end about their continue it in anogher story.
12/14/2013 c80 
3ErzaKnightwalker1376
YOU SUCK! i have to refrain from bawling my eyes out cuz of what Rachel is always put through... and yet, i can empathize with her on level that may be scary... hell if i didn't know better, i'd totally think that Rachel had been based off of me because of how much i have in common with her...
3ErzaKnightwalker1376YOU SUCK! i have to refrain from bawling my eyes out cuz of what Rachel is always put through... and yet, i can empathize with her on level that may be scary... hell if i didn't know better, i'd totally think that Rachel had been based off of me because of how much i have in common with her...