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3/2/2005 c1 16Wing Chant
Wow, that was powerful. I love the artist's obsession with unicorns, lol yet he's not insane or anything. It's a beautiful conception. XD =D LOVE IT! *hugs you and gives you lots of flowers* You've captured the beauty of fantasy right in this story in such a unique way, I can't even put into words. oO All I can do is say: Good job! And hand you a plate of virtual cookies, of course. ^^ *gives you cookies* yay!

loserz. ;)
1/14/2004 c1 8SinisterK
I enjoy the way this story is done. It's less fanciful(if that's the correct word) than other stories. The narrator seems like a normal person with a normal life and that's what helps this story seem sp believable. But I like how you made it seem like Danielle was a unicorn, intentionally or not. Good job!
7/19/2003 c1 66Unicorn Goddess
Very nice. I think I can relate to your character's obsession. ;-) Keep up the good work.
3/14/2003 c1 7Ghost
Not bad, kinda cute.

BTW, it's a little know fact that physical unicorns are highly agressive and tends to kill everyone who gets near them. This is good to keep in mind if you're ever out looking for one of them. ^_~
2/6/2003 c1 7Shelti M
Beautifully written and inspiring.
1/13/2003 c1 10jingdono
I enjoyed reading this a lot. Possibly this is beacause I've been writing my own unicorn story for almost a year now (and I can never get it right; it keeps slipping through my fingers) I liked the things you left unsaid here; I'm a big fan of things which are not said being louder than things which are.

If I could offer any constructive criticism at all it would be that the ending is a little abrupt and could do with a bit of tempering. (endings are hard. unless I start out with exactly what I want the end to be like mapped out in my head it always goes Pete Tong)

Other than that I found your language fluid and elegant. Very pretty.
11/8/2002 c1 12Dawn I. Cambridge
Oh I love it... your use of imagery and your descriptions make me feel warm and happy inside... secure...
11/7/2002 c1 8Posi
That's so NICE! It's so cool how you have a guy who's obsessed with unicorns (I only just realized how weird that is...) and yet he seems pretty normal. Since this is a short story, it's cool how you talk about Danielle and how he's had kinda a rough time of it but you don't make people TOOO curious (the unicorn is the important part).

Seriously, (um, I use that word a LOT. thought you should know.) you are the only writer on fanfiction that I know of, (yes, out of the twenty-five or so that I know of,) you are the only one who I reaaaaaaaaaally really really like. Really. I mean... really. I'm going to shut up now.


6/12/2002 c1 34Sparkles-Chan
Awesome. Now if I ever find a unicorn I'm going to name it Danielle. ^.~
5/11/2002 c1 16Marty-Mouse
That was beautiful... almost romantic in a sense and a nice unique way of doing a fantasy story.
4/28/2002 c1 122Mistress Jakira
Wow! That was great! So well-written and well-thought out! Amazing story you have here; it has a lesson in it-but the story isn't built around the lesson; rather, the lesson is built around the story. That's a good thing! ^_^ And you never outright say he saw a unicorn! Did he! Aw gee, I guess I'm meant to wonder...maybe he was hallucinating or something? @ Drives me crazy! Anyway...lol okay okay I guess I'm done now, but this is fabulous-imagery, lesson, excellent characterization, it's got everything. Wonderful work, keep at it! ~MJ
4/22/2002 c1 20Cassandra Anthemyst
That was so beautiful! it reminds me of a short story by Bruce Coville in a book called Oddly Enough, the story is The Box or something like that. Anyway, part of the story is that a man named michael saw an angel when he was young, and when he grew older he tried to paint the face of the angel. But the angel was so beautiful he felt his paintings were horrible in comparison, even though everyone else thought they were beautiful. Your character's desperation to draw something so beautiful reminds me of that.
3/30/2002 c1 Anukis
This is a great story...very mysterious and all. But very realistic...almost as if it could happen...I luv it.
3/21/2002 c1 20Bringin' Home the Bacon
Wow very mysterious! I like alot, little too descriptive for my taste! But i still lke it!

^-^ read my stuff too!
3/2/2002 c1 LPluver4ever
cool story
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