for It Would Take A Children's Rhyme1/14/2009 c1 
50GirlWithTheBrokenSmile
I like the way you rewrote the old rhymes. I really enjoyed reading the poem:) My puppy did, too. He's very sensitive.
Write on, 'cause you've got what it takes:)
50GirlWithTheBrokenSmileI like the way you rewrote the old rhymes. I really enjoyed reading the poem:) My puppy did, too. He's very sensitive.
Write on, 'cause you've got what it takes:)
1/14/2009 c1 8LostInMe
"It followed her to my brain pool
Swallowed hard, emote drool
It followed her to my brain pool
Her caress made it sow"
That struck me as funny. I don't know why. Great poem!
8LostInMe"It followed her to my brain pool
Swallowed hard, emote drool
It followed her to my brain pool
Her caress made it sow"
That struck me as funny. I don't know why. Great poem!
1/14/2009 c1 tangerine dreamer
i love this. the rhyming is simple and easy to read, yet mature in its wording. the last stanza is my favorite.
keep up the great work!
i love this. the rhyming is simple and easy to read, yet mature in its wording. the last stanza is my favorite.
keep up the great work!