for Black Sheep Part 110/11/2010 c20 katanalover
A really captivating story.
the way you jumped in the beginning with vic remembering stuff was very interesting and the whole style of writing from the different perspectives made the story more rounded, but some parts were a bit confusing in that it was hard to identify whose perspective was being read. but i loved the storyline :D though, and this is just the addict reader in me, you should write more on it, i sort of feel like it can still go somewhere... but maybe that's just me.
A really captivating story.
the way you jumped in the beginning with vic remembering stuff was very interesting and the whole style of writing from the different perspectives made the story more rounded, but some parts were a bit confusing in that it was hard to identify whose perspective was being read. but i loved the storyline :D though, and this is just the addict reader in me, you should write more on it, i sort of feel like it can still go somewhere... but maybe that's just me.
4/6/2010 c13 canuckscommunity
Wow, harsh.. I can't imagine anyone would be so cold when finding something like that out about someone... :(
Sorry I'm late in reviewing, my dear! I haven't had much time lately due to hockey and school too.
Thanks for the two new chapters though, always nice to come home to something to read ^_^ I liked this chapter a lot too... Poor Vic seems so insecure =(
Wow, harsh.. I can't imagine anyone would be so cold when finding something like that out about someone... :(
Sorry I'm late in reviewing, my dear! I haven't had much time lately due to hockey and school too.
Thanks for the two new chapters though, always nice to come home to something to read ^_^ I liked this chapter a lot too... Poor Vic seems so insecure =(
1/16/2010 c11 
3aWishThatNeverComesTrue
Love Love Love it, now I really want to know whats happening. plz add another chapter soon, my mental stability rests in your hands
3aWishThatNeverComesTrueLove Love Love it, now I really want to know whats happening. plz add another chapter soon, my mental stability rests in your hands
12/26/2009 c11 canuckscommunity
Hey hunni it's been a while... I had to re-read some chapters (and some new ones :D) to re-fresh my memory x)
And more sensual scenes, I'm a sucker for those o3o Vic seems to have post-traumatic stress symptoms too, it'd be interesting to learn more about his character.
Merry (late) Christmas and thanks for the new chapters~!
Hey hunni it's been a while... I had to re-read some chapters (and some new ones :D) to re-fresh my memory x)
And more sensual scenes, I'm a sucker for those o3o Vic seems to have post-traumatic stress symptoms too, it'd be interesting to learn more about his character.
Merry (late) Christmas and thanks for the new chapters~!
11/23/2009 c10 Kikue Mugen
Spotted a few typos, but the overall story went very well. I've noticed a great imporvement since the beginning of the story - becoming seasoned along the way, I see ;) The outstanding "positive" about the chapter is the fact that it is very descriptive which is a big plus to making the chapter an interesting read. Keep up the good work!
Spotted a few typos, but the overall story went very well. I've noticed a great imporvement since the beginning of the story - becoming seasoned along the way, I see ;) The outstanding "positive" about the chapter is the fact that it is very descriptive which is a big plus to making the chapter an interesting read. Keep up the good work!
4/29/2009 c8 canuckscommunity
huh that's such a coincidence, everytime i decide to drop by your fic is always updated :'D good writing with vic in this chapter too... his attack really felt panicked. update again soon :D
huh that's such a coincidence, everytime i decide to drop by your fic is always updated :'D good writing with vic in this chapter too... his attack really felt panicked. update again soon :D
4/19/2009 c7 canuckscommunity
great chapter again, the first part especially... so sweet ^.^ and thanks for the shoutouts- you're very welcome x)
great chapter again, the first part especially... so sweet ^.^ and thanks for the shoutouts- you're very welcome x)
4/5/2009 c6 canuckscommunity
i like your characters, marie is so cute ^.^ she kinda reminds me of sakura from naruto.
anyways thanks for the new chapter, this story is quite well-written ^.^ it's hard to find good shonen-ai with plot and character development xD
hehe and sorry for the late review, i'm on fanfiction more than fictionpress nowadays (...anime fanatic xD) update again soon!
i like your characters, marie is so cute ^.^ she kinda reminds me of sakura from naruto.
anyways thanks for the new chapter, this story is quite well-written ^.^ it's hard to find good shonen-ai with plot and character development xD
hehe and sorry for the late review, i'm on fanfiction more than fictionpress nowadays (...anime fanatic xD) update again soon!
3/30/2009 c6 Kikue Mugen
Yes! I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! Wonderfully written from beginning to end. Lovely build up to their meeting, very sensual in its anticipation. A great cliff hanger at the end always makes the reader want MORE! I know I do and look forward to reading the next chapter. Good job!
Yes! I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! Wonderfully written from beginning to end. Lovely build up to their meeting, very sensual in its anticipation. A great cliff hanger at the end always makes the reader want MORE! I know I do and look forward to reading the next chapter. Good job!
3/13/2009 c5 canuckscommunity
hehe i guess i still owe you a review =^.^= sorry sometimes i just read a story but am too lazy to drop a message to the author xD;;
this is a good story, really well-written. i like m/m stories so i'm quite happy i found this xD your characters are interesting... i like interaction between them, it's written quite fluidly.
i shall await your next update ^^
hehe i guess i still owe you a review =^.^= sorry sometimes i just read a story but am too lazy to drop a message to the author xD;;
this is a good story, really well-written. i like m/m stories so i'm quite happy i found this xD your characters are interesting... i like interaction between them, it's written quite fluidly.
i shall await your next update ^^
3/12/2009 c5 Kikue Mugen
As usual the chapter has me looking forward to the next, which means you did a great job at 'story telling.' However I did catch a few grammar and typos along the way, but it didn't distract from the story. Overall, the story has me hoping things will work out for the characters, and again it keep the reader guessing and that is what makes the story interesting.
As usual the chapter has me looking forward to the next, which means you did a great job at 'story telling.' However I did catch a few grammar and typos along the way, but it didn't distract from the story. Overall, the story has me hoping things will work out for the characters, and again it keep the reader guessing and that is what makes the story interesting.