for Sunset1/15/2009 c1 
53Katie Nicole
Ahh! I love this!
The subject matter, the subtle rhyme.. lovely!
I especially liked this metaphor:
"Sunset dips her face
In mine and shakes
Her head off every night."
My favorite part.
Beautiful.
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Katie
53Katie NicoleAhh! I love this!
The subject matter, the subtle rhyme.. lovely!
I especially liked this metaphor:
"Sunset dips her face
In mine and shakes
Her head off every night."
My favorite part.
Beautiful.
_
Katie
1/14/2009 c1 13brunettelitlover
I like this! I like the lost tone to it, its sort of mysterious. It's a very good read. I like it a lot!
13brunettelitloverI like this! I like the lost tone to it, its sort of mysterious. It's a very good read. I like it a lot!
1/14/2009 c1 119Ezio. The Sentinel
It's hard to find a purpose in life, I see. How do you know where you are if you don't know where you're going in the first place? Love it. Fav'ed.
~Thermite
119Ezio. The SentinelIt's hard to find a purpose in life, I see. How do you know where you are if you don't know where you're going in the first place? Love it. Fav'ed.
~Thermite