for Playing it Cool5/15/2013 c1 toffeema
that was fun to read. :)
that was fun to read. :)
7/25/2012 c1 Faelle
Cute yet realistic, a combination that's hard to find. I really liked how you made as if it were a real conversation between two friends that have feelings for each other, how they don't repeat their names every ten lines and actually think. It was really sweet and instead of having me rolling my eyes, it had me awwing and laughing so thank you :)
Cute yet realistic, a combination that's hard to find. I really liked how you made as if it were a real conversation between two friends that have feelings for each other, how they don't repeat their names every ten lines and actually think. It was really sweet and instead of having me rolling my eyes, it had me awwing and laughing so thank you :)
6/3/2012 c1 Krissa16
Cute! great one shot :) well done!
Cute! great one shot :) well done!
1/8/2012 c1 freakyzoe
Heh, that was fun :) a change from the usual dramatic scenes of confession, with an actual conversation, cute and awkward^^. It was refreshingly simple :)
Heh, that was fun :) a change from the usual dramatic scenes of confession, with an actual conversation, cute and awkward^^. It was refreshingly simple :)
7/14/2010 c1 
3BethyT
This was insanely cute- and realistic, which I appreciate. I also think it was fantastically written.
All in all, great job!
3BethyTThis was insanely cute- and realistic, which I appreciate. I also think it was fantastically written.
All in all, great job!
7/14/2010 c1 sandcastlesinthesand
AW! THIS WAS AMAZING!
It was a lot more realistic. The awkwardness of it all... In most stories, it's just like OKAY, WE'RE IN LOVE! LET'S KISS!
In this story, it was just like, "Um... What the hell am I supposed to do?"
And I loved it. I could feel the awkwardness.
This was really well written, and it was sweet and funny.
GOOD JOB!
xoxo, Amanda
AW! THIS WAS AMAZING!
It was a lot more realistic. The awkwardness of it all... In most stories, it's just like OKAY, WE'RE IN LOVE! LET'S KISS!
In this story, it was just like, "Um... What the hell am I supposed to do?"
And I loved it. I could feel the awkwardness.
This was really well written, and it was sweet and funny.
GOOD JOB!
xoxo, Amanda
6/9/2010 c1 Anara Celebvilya
That was awesome! While it was a little cliche, it was still really good. I really enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for the entertainment!
That was awesome! While it was a little cliche, it was still really good. I really enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for the entertainment!