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1/19/2009 c1 3The True Dreamer
Awwee! This was really nice. For someone who'd saved me from such a horrible situation, I would search the world to find him and thank him in everyway I could! Just my opinion though. Nice work!
1/18/2009 c1 28mikey magee
I like the message in this poem. It was warm and sweet. I love the message on how someone can make a difference.

Now, this was a good poem, but I think that if you gave the word choice a little more "oomph" it could be great. For example, instead of just saying that she wanted to end it all,show it through imagery. Describe things a little bit more.

Besides that, it was great. Keep writing!

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