for Fast Love1/16/2009 c1 
1Movielover8192
I really like this poem. It's touching and I think that it is very true. I think there is some missing commas which would help to break it up without losing that amazing rhythm, but other than that it is great.
1Movielover8192I really like this poem. It's touching and I think that it is very true. I think there is some missing commas which would help to break it up without losing that amazing rhythm, but other than that it is great.