for To Lose Is To Gain3/14/2009 c16 theloveneverfades
This is really good, keep it up, it fills the hours when my parents aren't forcing me to practice piano
This is really good, keep it up, it fills the hours when my parents aren't forcing me to practice piano
3/11/2009 c1 
12Lovjessejames69
I love you story. I found it randomly when I was looking for something to read during break. I look forward to what Ra is going to do. I sorta hope she ends up with Ethan and like Ash goes a bit crazy because of it. I like drama. LOL. But keep it up i really want to know where these characters go.
12Lovjessejames69I love you story. I found it randomly when I was looking for something to read during break. I look forward to what Ra is going to do. I sorta hope she ends up with Ethan and like Ash goes a bit crazy because of it. I like drama. LOL. But keep it up i really want to know where these characters go.
3/9/2009 c14 32Megii of Mysteri OusStranger
Hey! Sorry I haven't been around to review, I've been out of town and out of reach of the internet.
The story is great, it seems to just be getting better and better. But i can understand you running out of steam for it about now. I have no protest if you want to take a break from it and write something else. I'll read that too! :D
32Megii of Mysteri OusStrangerHey! Sorry I haven't been around to review, I've been out of town and out of reach of the internet.
The story is great, it seems to just be getting better and better. But i can understand you running out of steam for it about now. I have no protest if you want to take a break from it and write something else. I'll read that too! :D
2/10/2009 c11 Megii of Mysteri OusStranger
Hahaaha, even outside of school she can't escape him! Karma is right there to bit her on the ass around every corner, isn't it? Lovely.
Sorry I haven't updated my own story for you. Some personal chaos erupted and I am very confused and can't write. :( I hope it passes quickly.
Hahaaha, even outside of school she can't escape him! Karma is right there to bit her on the ass around every corner, isn't it? Lovely.
Sorry I haven't updated my own story for you. Some personal chaos erupted and I am very confused and can't write. :( I hope it passes quickly.
2/5/2009 c10 Megii of Mysteri OusStranger
Oh no, she forgot about her Grandma, didn't she? Just when it seems she wants to straighten out. And ew, pot. That stuff STINKS! Thus the reason i will never do it.
Oh no, she forgot about her Grandma, didn't she? Just when it seems she wants to straighten out. And ew, pot. That stuff STINKS! Thus the reason i will never do it.
2/2/2009 c9 Megii of Mysteri OusStranger
Cool, someone other than me thinks he's a shady guy! It's kinda like Badass Biker vs Pretty Prep. I'd probably be with the biker too. XD I also find Ethan a little annoying, just like Raelyn, ahahaha.
I'll try to make my own chapters longer, but the thing is, I'm trying to stay several chapters ahead of my postings, and i've kinda caught up with myself. 0.o I might delay postings for a little while so i can get ahead again.
Love your story still! XD
Cool, someone other than me thinks he's a shady guy! It's kinda like Badass Biker vs Pretty Prep. I'd probably be with the biker too. XD I also find Ethan a little annoying, just like Raelyn, ahahaha.
I'll try to make my own chapters longer, but the thing is, I'm trying to stay several chapters ahead of my postings, and i've kinda caught up with myself. 0.o I might delay postings for a little while so i can get ahead again.
Love your story still! XD
1/30/2009 c8 Megii of Mysteri OusStranger
Ooh, things are getting steamy. This chapter felt a little long, but that might just be me writing such short things lately. Looking forward to the next segment!
Ooh, things are getting steamy. This chapter felt a little long, but that might just be me writing such short things lately. Looking forward to the next segment!
1/27/2009 c7 Megii of Mysteri OusStranger
Oh dear, i get the feeling he's going to get her to try drugs next... however, that would be too predictable, i think.
Great chapter again! I could really feel her anger at having such a secret let out. I hate being pitied too.
Oh dear, i get the feeling he's going to get her to try drugs next... however, that would be too predictable, i think.
Great chapter again! I could really feel her anger at having such a secret let out. I hate being pitied too.
1/26/2009 c6 Megii of Mysteri OusStranger
Gasp! I hadn't realized I was your only reviewer! from now on, I will make an effort to review every chapter!
i don't like that she's started smoking, but I can see why she gave it a try. That guy is going to be trouble, i can tell. How exciting!
Gasp! I hadn't realized I was your only reviewer! from now on, I will make an effort to review every chapter!
i don't like that she's started smoking, but I can see why she gave it a try. That guy is going to be trouble, i can tell. How exciting!
1/17/2009 c2 Megii of Mysteri OusStranger
Excellent story. Excellent, excellent. Very real. Keep up the good work.
Excellent story. Excellent, excellent. Very real. Keep up the good work.