for Our Own Reality Show7/25/2009 c1 Phoenix Octavia Bright
First love and rebond boyfriend? I smell trouble!
Short introduction, but it says a lo´t.
PB
First love and rebond boyfriend? I smell trouble!
Short introduction, but it says a lo´t.
PB
7/10/2009 c2 
4HighOnBrokenWings
Ooh! Cliffhanger ending to the chapter! Omg that familiarness was really well written it reminded me so much of when you se someone youre sure you recognise from somewhere, but cant work it out. It was very nice :)
4HighOnBrokenWingsOoh! Cliffhanger ending to the chapter! Omg that familiarness was really well written it reminded me so much of when you se someone youre sure you recognise from somewhere, but cant work it out. It was very nice :)
7/10/2009 c1 HighOnBrokenWings
Cool first chapter :) Im reading on. Its an original idea, and I really like it so far :P
Cool first chapter :) Im reading on. Its an original idea, and I really like it so far :P
6/24/2009 c2 2Arabella Knightfair
Nice, it sounds interesting. I'm already wanting to read more!
Ara
xoxo
2Arabella KnightfairNice, it sounds interesting. I'm already wanting to read more!
Ara
xoxo
4/19/2009 c2 Xiaolu
Interesting! I wonder what's going to happen now.
Ryan seems sweet and she seems to ba happy~ But well, Darien hasn't forgotten Arielle, has he? :p *curious*
*add to story alert*
Interesting! I wonder what's going to happen now.
Ryan seems sweet and she seems to ba happy~ But well, Darien hasn't forgotten Arielle, has he? :p *curious*
*add to story alert*
4/6/2009 c1 34Ashlee Pond
Interesting concept. Certainly sounds like it could be a good concept - though I would have enjoyed a little more detail in this first instalment, particularly with the emotions and circumstances of the narrator. But it's a good start for an aspiring writer. I hope you continue.
34Ashlee PondInteresting concept. Certainly sounds like it could be a good concept - though I would have enjoyed a little more detail in this first instalment, particularly with the emotions and circumstances of the narrator. But it's a good start for an aspiring writer. I hope you continue.
2/27/2009 c1 chocolatecaramel
Hm...I assume this chapter's an introduction to your story? It's interesting, really. And it would have been more catching if you made it a little longer.
Anyway, good luck with this one! :)
Hm...I assume this chapter's an introduction to your story? It's interesting, really. And it would have been more catching if you made it a little longer.
Anyway, good luck with this one! :)
1/17/2009 c1 Annie Winter
Hello!
Well your story is interesting at the first sight, but are you continue with it because is really short the first chapter.
If you are continue with it(that´s what i hope) do it soon please.
SEE´YA
BYE
Hello!
Well your story is interesting at the first sight, but are you continue with it because is really short the first chapter.
If you are continue with it(that´s what i hope) do it soon please.
SEE´YA
BYE