for The One AM Philosopher1/27/2009 c1 
17Unique1952
Very nice. It would be difficult for me to choose a particular line that is my favorite because I think that its all good.Again, nice work, I enjoyed reading this.
17Unique1952Very nice. It would be difficult for me to choose a particular line that is my favorite because I think that its all good.Again, nice work, I enjoyed reading this.
1/17/2009 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
First off, a question: Is the title meant to be ambiguous (single versus 1 in the morning)? At first I thought it meant single and then I got confused... my cognitive skills aren't too hot right now.
Anyways, regarding the poem itself, I quite like it. There's something surprisingly casual to this philos-heavy poem. I especially like the line "God may someday shed some light", mostly because it leaves room for interpretation. The questions are at times a bit too much, but the end is clear and concise. Nicely done.
37TaltushMeiMeiFirst off, a question: Is the title meant to be ambiguous (single versus 1 in the morning)? At first I thought it meant single and then I got confused... my cognitive skills aren't too hot right now.
Anyways, regarding the poem itself, I quite like it. There's something surprisingly casual to this philos-heavy poem. I especially like the line "God may someday shed some light", mostly because it leaves room for interpretation. The questions are at times a bit too much, but the end is clear and concise. Nicely done.