for Life's Tough Go Buy a Helmet1/26/2009 c1 lilmizniamhy
ok i guess i didn't read it, all well i've read it now, that's so cute, sweet and totally awsome!
ok i guess i didn't read it, all well i've read it now, that's so cute, sweet and totally awsome!
1/22/2009 c1 
11Jessica Princhesca
Jeez. This is so great. You should add more about each of the characters, kinda like an entwining story, ya know?
And the last part was so sad.
You almost made me cry. Lol.
Keep it up.
11Jessica PrinchescaJeez. This is so great. You should add more about each of the characters, kinda like an entwining story, ya know?
And the last part was so sad.
You almost made me cry. Lol.
Keep it up.
1/22/2009 c1 1AzureEyesAreDreaming
I love it xD very clever and the circumstances you've explained are so common, everyone has been in those sort of situations.
1AzureEyesAreDreamingI love it xD very clever and the circumstances you've explained are so common, everyone has been in those sort of situations.
1/18/2009 c1 1GaIn
I think you've done a really good job here. I especially liked the little bit with Owen and Pippa. It was super-cute. Your writing style fit very well with it, also. It was simple enough, but not too bare. Very well balanced, and you did good with the characters as well.
1GaInI think you've done a really good job here. I especially liked the little bit with Owen and Pippa. It was super-cute. Your writing style fit very well with it, also. It was simple enough, but not too bare. Very well balanced, and you did good with the characters as well.
1/18/2009 c1 6Nacreous Neomania
aw that was so sweet! the second one was the one the hit home, cos the quote is so true! have you written other stuff? i'm new here and i'm just kinda browsing and taking recommendations. :)
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6Nacreous Neomaniaaw that was so sweet! the second one was the one the hit home, cos the quote is so true! have you written other stuff? i'm new here and i'm just kinda browsing and taking recommendations. :)
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