for Red Violet1/4/2010 c31 
5Beena
You know, I've been reading this story, all of it for months now. I'm really sad it's over, and I'm sorry I didn't review =( but I just want you to know that it's completely fantastic. ^_^
5BeenaYou know, I've been reading this story, all of it for months now. I'm really sad it's over, and I'm sorry I didn't review =( but I just want you to know that it's completely fantastic. ^_^
12/12/2009 c30 2Enemy of Righteousness
Devoured the chapter.
I liked it, especially sense Zander still acts a bit like a brat. I liked how you had that girl come up to him instead of someone like Gwen or Issac. The next chapter should be very interesting, sense I'm guessing that's where he goes to school again.
Great job. ^_^
2Enemy of RighteousnessDevoured the chapter.
I liked it, especially sense Zander still acts a bit like a brat. I liked how you had that girl come up to him instead of someone like Gwen or Issac. The next chapter should be very interesting, sense I'm guessing that's where he goes to school again.
Great job. ^_^
12/10/2009 c29 Enemy of Righteousness
I liked it, I'm excited to see what happens once Zander levels up. (That makes him sound like a Pokemon. Hur hur.) Anyways, I like how Zander still can't make good arguments, but they do get better over time.
I liked it, I'm excited to see what happens once Zander levels up. (That makes him sound like a Pokemon. Hur hur.) Anyways, I like how Zander still can't make good arguments, but they do get better over time.
11/27/2009 c28 Enemy of Righteousness
Aw, Marisa was cute. I love seeing Zander get better and what not. You do a good job at character development, which a lot of other stories tend to lack. Ah, your reply made me more excited to see what happens when Zander sees Gwen again. Sounds like it's going to be rather...eventful.
I actually did spread the word somewhat. I left a link on my friends profile on facebook because she wanted to read it a few days again. Regretfully, you probably won't receive a review from her because she's lazy and doesn't have an account.
Good update, I enjoyed it. ^_^
Aw, Marisa was cute. I love seeing Zander get better and what not. You do a good job at character development, which a lot of other stories tend to lack. Ah, your reply made me more excited to see what happens when Zander sees Gwen again. Sounds like it's going to be rather...eventful.
I actually did spread the word somewhat. I left a link on my friends profile on facebook because she wanted to read it a few days again. Regretfully, you probably won't receive a review from her because she's lazy and doesn't have an account.
Good update, I enjoyed it. ^_^
11/27/2009 c27 Enemy of Righteousness
I LOVE THIS STORY! :D
It's awesome.
At first, I liked Zander, then I reallt didn't. I mean, he is a whiny little brat. But I still felt sorry for him. Now I'm liking him again. At first I didn't like Gary, but I really, really like him now. Although, at first I liked Gwen, but where she was left off, I didn't like her so much. I hate Zanders father and I don't really like his mom that much and I really don't like Alan. XD Kate and Kevin are awesome, and same with Zanders new therapist. I forgot her name though. D:
By the way, this chapter was so cute. :3
I wish this story had more reviews, it's obvious that you put a lot of time into it.
Well, I'll be awaiting your next update! ^_^
I LOVE THIS STORY! :D
It's awesome.
At first, I liked Zander, then I reallt didn't. I mean, he is a whiny little brat. But I still felt sorry for him. Now I'm liking him again. At first I didn't like Gary, but I really, really like him now. Although, at first I liked Gwen, but where she was left off, I didn't like her so much. I hate Zanders father and I don't really like his mom that much and I really don't like Alan. XD Kate and Kevin are awesome, and same with Zanders new therapist. I forgot her name though. D:
By the way, this chapter was so cute. :3
I wish this story had more reviews, it's obvious that you put a lot of time into it.
Well, I'll be awaiting your next update! ^_^
11/22/2009 c26 2Rae Simmons
Well he's sorta getting better, it seems like he's almost entirely forgotten about the... "incidents"... I wonder how long that will last though... -ponders-
2Rae SimmonsWell he's sorta getting better, it seems like he's almost entirely forgotten about the... "incidents"... I wonder how long that will last though... -ponders-
11/21/2009 c1 27Liebe Dance
This seriously made me want to cry. Totally hooking. Can't wait to read the rest!
27Liebe DanceThis seriously made me want to cry. Totally hooking. Can't wait to read the rest!
11/21/2009 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Oh, I feel so bad for Alex. :( Poor kid. His mom is clearly this woman who doesn't know anything about parenting, and he's way too grown up for being in kindergarten . . . So yes, nice work in making me care about the main character from the start, and the only thing I wonder about is if the dialogue isn't too advanced for 5-year-olds? But I suppose, it can't be easy to write from the POV of someone that age. It's hard remembering what it was to be 5. But yes, this is nice. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesOh, I feel so bad for Alex. :( Poor kid. His mom is clearly this woman who doesn't know anything about parenting, and he's way too grown up for being in kindergarten . . . So yes, nice work in making me care about the main character from the start, and the only thing I wonder about is if the dialogue isn't too advanced for 5-year-olds? But I suppose, it can't be easy to write from the POV of someone that age. It's hard remembering what it was to be 5. But yes, this is nice. Keep writing! :)
11/8/2009 c7 Pause Scream and Now Smile
Haha scene kids. LOL this brings back memories of me being a scene kid lol.Wow..
Isn't it weird how gothic people and scene people tend not to like each other even thought they are kind of in the same style tree/groupies.
Lovely chapter. Gwen is so nice.
Did she use to be a cutter/is a cutter? A sign of cutting is wearing baggy clothing.
Haha scene kids. LOL this brings back memories of me being a scene kid lol.Wow..
Isn't it weird how gothic people and scene people tend not to like each other even thought they are kind of in the same style tree/groupies.
Lovely chapter. Gwen is so nice.
Did she use to be a cutter/is a cutter? A sign of cutting is wearing baggy clothing.
11/8/2009 c6 Pause Scream and Now Smile
You know, I like the way you make the characters so real. I mean one minute I'm hating them the next minute I'm loving them again. I guess this shows not everyone is completely nice or an asshole. I'm a bit tired so sorry if my reviews don't make sense.
You know, I like the way you make the characters so real. I mean one minute I'm hating them the next minute I'm loving them again. I guess this shows not everyone is completely nice or an asshole. I'm a bit tired so sorry if my reviews don't make sense.
11/8/2009 c4 Pause Scream and Now Smile
I'm glad Alan helped him. I seriously want to give this kid a hug.
I'm glad Alan helped him. I seriously want to give this kid a hug.
11/8/2009 c3 Pause Scream and Now Smile
aww I feel sorry for him, his mom is super not understanding. Sadly i can relate this character to one of my best friends =/
aww I feel sorry for him, his mom is super not understanding. Sadly i can relate this character to one of my best friends =/
11/8/2009 c2 Pause Scream and Now Smile
I really like the character development. I like Gwen =) I totally love your story!
I really like the character development. I like Gwen =) I totally love your story!