for Snowball5/17/2001 c3 Carrie
Good story! I liked it but, its kind of a sad ending! :-) I hope you write more! ^o^
Good story! I liked it but, its kind of a sad ending! :-) I hope you write more! ^o^
4/22/2001 c1 artemisathene
You have a very nice writing style and you have an incredible grasp of the technicalities of writing at your age - not many people my age can write that way. The description is very good.
But one thing - it would be more angsty if Snowball was not her mother's favorite. The mother so far seems to be taking sides with Snowball. But that's just my opinion. ^^ Keep up the great job!
You have a very nice writing style and you have an incredible grasp of the technicalities of writing at your age - not many people my age can write that way. The description is very good.
But one thing - it would be more angsty if Snowball was not her mother's favorite. The mother so far seems to be taking sides with Snowball. But that's just my opinion. ^^ Keep up the great job!