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1/18/2009 c1 2dragonflydreamer
I wasn't too fond of the repitition throughout the piece. It was so exsessive that it became overbearing and overshadowed the meaning of your other words.

I like the tone of this, though. It carries a lot of emotion that isn't necessarily written into the words.

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1/18/2009 c1 2deceit-anonymous
Nice. :)
1/18/2009 c1 18Lil'Fleur
I like it. I can easyly rely on it even if it's not me who wrote it :) Good job !

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