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12/13/2009 c1 23thinking.about.thinking
Aww, that's sweet and sad.

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3/3/2009 c1 138lael1bologna
AWWE! Nice!
2/5/2009 c1 16PopMakesMeBurpy
It's things like this, which is why we come to you for Love/Relationship advice. Though, you havent really been in a relationship, you seem to understand them. As shown in this poem. :)
1/18/2009 c1 8Ohka Breynekai
It's always interesting... someone who seems so adverse to relationships is always writing love poetry. (depressing love poetry...)

You are just full of contradictions, aren't ya?

(I bet you just laughed)

My favorite line was: "Your memory melt like snow". It's just one of those interesting little similes. I was reading the other day about something called 'journalese'. Those are words or phrases that have already been used by people and are used again to make writing easier. Like, "paint a picture" or "pitch black". It's where your readers will see the phrase and not even register its meaning. So, it's refreshing to see "memory melt". One can actually visualize it. :)

I just realized - I'm not on your alert list. Is there some reason for that? -.-

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