for Sick Joke2/11/2009 c1 
173Little girl Big world
This is good its harsh and sad but it made for a good reading experience because even if its not for the same reason a lot pf people have felt let down at some point in their life. Good job!
173Little girl Big worldThis is good its harsh and sad but it made for a good reading experience because even if its not for the same reason a lot pf people have felt let down at some point in their life. Good job!
1/22/2009 c1 50GirlWithTheBrokenSmile
Beautifully written and well rhymed. I think everybody feels this way at some point in their life.
50GirlWithTheBrokenSmileBeautifully written and well rhymed. I think everybody feels this way at some point in their life.
1/20/2009 c1 12pixy dust and fairytales
Aw, great job. Well written. Sad. If it's based on personal experience, I'm sorry.
Faith
12pixy dust and fairytalesAw, great job. Well written. Sad. If it's based on personal experience, I'm sorry.
Faith
1/18/2009 c1 1chococcino
This is a good poem. The last bit is the best and the most sad one of all. I liked it..
Gee, that was harsh! how could've it been a sick joke?
poor um 'I'...
eep, sorry I don't know the name of her/him
1chococcinoThis is a good poem. The last bit is the best and the most sad one of all. I liked it..
Gee, that was harsh! how could've it been a sick joke?
poor um 'I'...
eep, sorry I don't know the name of her/him
1/18/2009 c1 tangerine dreamer
this is so heartfelt and sad. i can relate in a way. nice rhyming, especially in the last stanza. keep it up!
this is so heartfelt and sad. i can relate in a way. nice rhyming, especially in the last stanza. keep it up!