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7/11/2009 c1 53Katie Nicole
Oh my word.

It takes two things to write a piece as brilliantly as you wrote this: balls and talent.

You, sir, possess both.

It was well paced, detailed, gritty and graphic, and an overall amazing read - if you've got the stomach for it. I found myself wincing and grimacing quite a few times - but your attention to detail and willingness to exploit every last moment of torture is astounding.

Excellent job with this!

- Katie
1/20/2009 c1 1luciddreamer28
Very intense and graphic! Good use of imagery.

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