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1/19/2009 c1 tangerine dreamer
i like that you told this story from beginning to end and managed to hold my interest because of the way you worded things. it's frank, a tad bit bitter, and has attitude so i love it.

the only thing i'm wondering about is the /br. i don't know if your html wasn't working or that's how you wanted it to be, but it is a bit distracting.

either way, nice work. keep it up!

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