for The Rules of Engagement7/21/2010 c20 
4fazzingaway
I don't know where to begin except for saying "Wow". I spent the better part of my work day reading your story because I couldn't keep my eyes off the screen. You have an amazing way with words and it translated well into your writing. I loved the easy pace this story hand and the believable way the romance between the characters was built up. Your characters were also well developed and I really enjoyed reading the banter and debates between Ant and Dorian. I also thought that the way the whole story was structured was well planned and nicely executed with the loose ends being tied as we got to the end. Well done indeed!
4fazzingawayI don't know where to begin except for saying "Wow". I spent the better part of my work day reading your story because I couldn't keep my eyes off the screen. You have an amazing way with words and it translated well into your writing. I loved the easy pace this story hand and the believable way the romance between the characters was built up. Your characters were also well developed and I really enjoyed reading the banter and debates between Ant and Dorian. I also thought that the way the whole story was structured was well planned and nicely executed with the loose ends being tied as we got to the end. Well done indeed!
7/15/2010 c20 1an-angelsmiles
I just read through this entire story and I must say I absolutely love it. I wish there was a sequel because it was so good. I loved their confusion throughout the story. We could tell they had a lot of chemistry, but their refusal to admit it was quite entertaining.
Congrats on writing such a wonderful story.
-Waffles
1an-angelsmilesI just read through this entire story and I must say I absolutely love it. I wish there was a sequel because it was so good. I loved their confusion throughout the story. We could tell they had a lot of chemistry, but their refusal to admit it was quite entertaining.
Congrats on writing such a wonderful story.
-Waffles
7/8/2010 c21 livingaliteraturelife
plz write a sequel plz oh plz oh plz i luv this story so much i was like no why did it end :'(
plz write a sequel plz oh plz oh plz i luv this story so much i was like no why did it end :'(
6/19/2010 c21 SandraStarck
Excellent story! I really liked the interactions between Dorian and Ant. Perry's matchmaking was sweet.
Already looking forward to the sequel:)!
Excellent story! I really liked the interactions between Dorian and Ant. Perry's matchmaking was sweet.
Already looking forward to the sequel:)!
6/16/2010 c21 6Madison Clarke
o daddys back?
i enjoyed it.
i really like dorian and perrys parents they seemed awsum. i was slightly confuesed with weather or not ant is chinese or american in the begining and but you cleared it up well with the explanation of her dad.
6Madison Clarkeo daddys back?
i enjoyed it.
i really like dorian and perrys parents they seemed awsum. i was slightly confuesed with weather or not ant is chinese or american in the begining and but you cleared it up well with the explanation of her dad.
6/15/2010 c8 Madison Clarke
when the editor called her i was a lil worried that judy was going to be doing the article instead of ant. glad you didnt do it that way.:-)
when the editor called her i was a lil worried that judy was going to be doing the article instead of ant. glad you didnt do it that way.:-)
5/31/2010 c21 anonymous
Just finished your story in a span of 24 hours! I hope you continue bec i think it's awesome! Thanks for such a great read
Just finished your story in a span of 24 hours! I hope you continue bec i think it's awesome! Thanks for such a great read
5/29/2010 c21 2righthere431
It took me a couple of days to read the entire story but I just want to say that this is phenomenal work! I hope to see what happens with them next!
2righthere431It took me a couple of days to read the entire story but I just want to say that this is phenomenal work! I hope to see what happens with them next!
5/26/2010 c6 Alice Novak
Very nice story! XD
You have me in a rapture seeing how well this is written.
I think this will be one of my favorites! x
Deli. x
Very nice story! XD
You have me in a rapture seeing how well this is written.
I think this will be one of my favorites! x
Deli. x
5/22/2010 c21 28Erisah Mae
This was a lot better than I thought it was going to be- honestly, your summary kind of sucks, but I thought I'd give it a shot anyway. And yeah, it's a cliche. But your characterizations felt smack on, and the development of the relationship was refreshingly authentic. I particularly liked how even though I knew Ant and Dorian would eventually end up together, I couldn't predict precisely how it was going to happen. The gradual build-up was nice, and I liked how you refrained from having them professing their "twu wub" for each other somewhere around chapter 15, as seems to be the usual pattern, quickly followed by the old "ZOMG DRAMA break up and then at the eleventh hour make up" shite.
I liked how there was an element of doubt there, how they were both thinking it over carefully before they committed. Similarly, I enjoyed how they talked about real things, debating about things that they thought about the real world and making concessions without completely changing their core values- the latter happening is another one of my pet hates.
All in all, nice one.
Erisah
28Erisah MaeThis was a lot better than I thought it was going to be- honestly, your summary kind of sucks, but I thought I'd give it a shot anyway. And yeah, it's a cliche. But your characterizations felt smack on, and the development of the relationship was refreshingly authentic. I particularly liked how even though I knew Ant and Dorian would eventually end up together, I couldn't predict precisely how it was going to happen. The gradual build-up was nice, and I liked how you refrained from having them professing their "twu wub" for each other somewhere around chapter 15, as seems to be the usual pattern, quickly followed by the old "ZOMG DRAMA break up and then at the eleventh hour make up" shite.
I liked how there was an element of doubt there, how they were both thinking it over carefully before they committed. Similarly, I enjoyed how they talked about real things, debating about things that they thought about the real world and making concessions without completely changing their core values- the latter happening is another one of my pet hates.
All in all, nice one.
Erisah
5/11/2010 c21 2WaitingPrincess
I love this story, I could read it over and over again and never get bored. Dorian and Ant have amazing chemistry and I like that they are intellectualy compatible as well as in every other way.I cried whan he left and I cried when he returned It would be amazing if you write a sequel.
2WaitingPrincessI love this story, I could read it over and over again and never get bored. Dorian and Ant have amazing chemistry and I like that they are intellectualy compatible as well as in every other way.I cried whan he left and I cried when he returned It would be amazing if you write a sequel.
5/9/2010 c21 NJWheeler
Maybe it's just that I usually don't read romance, but this is by far the most engrossing romance story I have ever read. I literally couldn't tear my eyes away. If you haven't considered being a novel writer already, then I strongly urge you to do so.
Maybe it's just that I usually don't read romance, but this is by far the most engrossing romance story I have ever read. I literally couldn't tear my eyes away. If you haven't considered being a novel writer already, then I strongly urge you to do so.