for The Rules of Engagement12/18/2014 c21 Lucy
"TBC ... eventually." That was 2009. It's nearly 2015. Eventually seems like it's taking a little too long! I really liked this story. A lot.
"TBC ... eventually." That was 2009. It's nearly 2015. Eventually seems like it's taking a little too long! I really liked this story. A lot.
11/2/2014 c21 Grespitchied
One of thE best characters in fictionpress! I cannot begin to explain how well thought of Dorian and Ant are! Such a beautiful story! Very good writting!
One of thE best characters in fictionpress! I cannot begin to explain how well thought of Dorian and Ant are! Such a beautiful story! Very good writting!
11/2/2014 c14 Grespitchied
The coooolest thing happened! I actually played a Mozella song for this chapter and as soon as I got to the line where Chris called the music ended! It was so perfectly and randomly timed I felt the impact of the what was happening even more!
The coooolest thing happened! I actually played a Mozella song for this chapter and as soon as I got to the line where Chris called the music ended! It was so perfectly and randomly timed I felt the impact of the what was happening even more!
9/19/2014 c21 estyywest
By far one of my favorite stores on FPress. There is something so beautiful about the way Dorian and Ant are different yet similar in a way that draws them together. Hoping for a sequel! :)
By far one of my favorite stores on FPress. There is something so beautiful about the way Dorian and Ant are different yet similar in a way that draws them together. Hoping for a sequel! :)
5/20/2014 c21 
13JDFly
Good story! I notice you havn't updated lately. Are you working on another story for us?
13JDFlyGood story! I notice you havn't updated lately. Are you working on another story for us?
5/3/2014 c2 JDFly
This story was on my 'to read' list some time ago, but I lost the list. Now, a couple years later, I run across your story again. So far - so good! A 69 Lamborghini? Hey, I like this guy. Beats the hell out of my 59 Vette. Butter and mustard on a chicken sandwich - Yuk! A chicken sandwich needs Swiss cheese, pickles & salad dressing.
This story was on my 'to read' list some time ago, but I lost the list. Now, a couple years later, I run across your story again. So far - so good! A 69 Lamborghini? Hey, I like this guy. Beats the hell out of my 59 Vette. Butter and mustard on a chicken sandwich - Yuk! A chicken sandwich needs Swiss cheese, pickles & salad dressing.
5/1/2014 c21 Silk Spectre
Just dropping by to say that this was absolutely phenomenal. What a treat it was to read it all the way through to the epilogue! You have certainly made me attached to Ant and Dorian. I don't even know where to begin!
The pacing of their relationship was good. Although giving her his dog tags would kinda be a bit unrealistic (especially given the fact that he wasn't even sure of what he felt for her when he left). I still thought that was sweet though.
Your characters are well-written. Although there were moments when I wanted to wring Ant's neck and tell her to stop being such a judgmental biatch! Especially since knowing next to nothing about Dorian's situation on the incident with the rowing team.
I do hope that you decide to continue this with a sequel! This is one of my favourites on this site! :)
Just dropping by to say that this was absolutely phenomenal. What a treat it was to read it all the way through to the epilogue! You have certainly made me attached to Ant and Dorian. I don't even know where to begin!
The pacing of their relationship was good. Although giving her his dog tags would kinda be a bit unrealistic (especially given the fact that he wasn't even sure of what he felt for her when he left). I still thought that was sweet though.
Your characters are well-written. Although there were moments when I wanted to wring Ant's neck and tell her to stop being such a judgmental biatch! Especially since knowing next to nothing about Dorian's situation on the incident with the rowing team.
I do hope that you decide to continue this with a sequel! This is one of my favourites on this site! :)
1/15/2014 c21 PenguinLover33
I love it! It's such a cute story and I think you ended it well. Good job!
I love it! It's such a cute story and I think you ended it well. Good job!
12/27/2013 c19 4R. Ficst
Hehe, came back for a re-read and enjoyed it immensely. Love the set up for the ending and those three beautiful words.
-tried to post that on chapter 20, but I'd already reviewed it so fictionpress won't let me.
4R. FicstHehe, came back for a re-read and enjoyed it immensely. Love the set up for the ending and those three beautiful words.
-tried to post that on chapter 20, but I'd already reviewed it so fictionpress won't let me.
10/23/2013 c21 4Fiery Dancer
Please continue! I loved this story - your character development was very nicely done :) I was so worried you'd leave this hanging with him abroad so thanks for writing the meet up!
4Fiery DancerPlease continue! I loved this story - your character development was very nicely done :) I was so worried you'd leave this hanging with him abroad so thanks for writing the meet up!
8/31/2013 c21 4singerchick
I really, really, really love this story :) Thank you so much for writing it and continuing to keep it up here on fictionpress :)
4singerchickI really, really, really love this story :) Thank you so much for writing it and continuing to keep it up here on fictionpress :)
8/20/2013 c20 Guest
This could be a movie. Such a good story, I absolutely loved it.
This could be a movie. Such a good story, I absolutely loved it.