12/17/2012 c21 2Hope.Love.Dreams
I've read this story before and still think it is absolutely amazing. The character and the plot is perfect and the emtions that have been portrayed in this are mind blowing. Congratulations and thank you.
I've read this story before and still think it is absolutely amazing. The character and the plot is perfect and the emtions that have been portrayed in this are mind blowing. Congratulations and thank you.
11/24/2012 c2 Nichelle
I usually don't comment on the stories I read, but for this one I had too. You mentioned Lupus and My mother and brother have it. I love how you mentioned the butterfly rash and how she didn't have it. My mother gets one but my brother never has and for the longest time they didn't think it was Lupus.
I usually don't comment on the stories I read, but for this one I had too. You mentioned Lupus and My mother and brother have it. I love how you mentioned the butterfly rash and how she didn't have it. My mother gets one but my brother never has and for the longest time they didn't think it was Lupus.
10/24/2012 c21 2eslover
I enjoyed this a lot more than I expected to, great love story. The situation may be slightly cliche (what romance isn't somehow cliche, really?) but you really made this premise original and the characters captivating. I would love to see this continued since it eventually will be I will be waiting for it :)
I enjoyed this a lot more than I expected to, great love story. The situation may be slightly cliche (what romance isn't somehow cliche, really?) but you really made this premise original and the characters captivating. I would love to see this continued since it eventually will be I will be waiting for it :)
10/23/2012 c12 eslover
I started reading the this yesterday, sorry for not reviewing sooner :) This is a nice story, very nicely done so far. I love how Dorian's reaction is described at the end of the chapter when Perry comes out and interrupts the anticipated kiss. Very nice and awkward, for someone who does not get flustered easily I am sure :)
I started reading the this yesterday, sorry for not reviewing sooner :) This is a nice story, very nicely done so far. I love how Dorian's reaction is described at the end of the chapter when Perry comes out and interrupts the anticipated kiss. Very nice and awkward, for someone who does not get flustered easily I am sure :)
9/3/2012 c21 leavemeialone
I really enjoyed this story. I am so glad I finally clicked to read this story. It was definitely not disappointing. I really enjoy Ant and Dorian interactions. I love their debates because I love what they have to say since their views are so contrasting and makes me consider something I haven't really thought of. I love their spark and chemistry, I hope that one day I can find the one just like that. It makes me envy what they have. I feel as though I am like Ant, I am also gaining a new found respect on the military men and women. Overall, thanks for writing this story!
I really enjoyed this story. I am so glad I finally clicked to read this story. It was definitely not disappointing. I really enjoy Ant and Dorian interactions. I love their debates because I love what they have to say since their views are so contrasting and makes me consider something I haven't really thought of. I love their spark and chemistry, I hope that one day I can find the one just like that. It makes me envy what they have. I feel as though I am like Ant, I am also gaining a new found respect on the military men and women. Overall, thanks for writing this story!
8/25/2012 c21 Hizuki
I love the DorianxAnt love! I wished there was a sequel already ): it's already been 3 years! Well I hope you post one soon
I love the DorianxAnt love! I wished there was a sequel already ): it's already been 3 years! Well I hope you post one soon
8/19/2012 c21 The Quotidian Life
AARRGGHH! I love it! And I can't believe that that's the end!
It is very well written; I love the story, your characters were great and your idea was simply unique! 3
Plus, you made me cry too. You're able to make us connect and empathise with your characters really well. I love it!
Cheers,
TQL
AARRGGHH! I love it! And I can't believe that that's the end!
It is very well written; I love the story, your characters were great and your idea was simply unique! 3
Plus, you made me cry too. You're able to make us connect and empathise with your characters really well. I love it!
Cheers,
TQL
8/18/2012 c21 8theKnobblyKneedWriter
This is just so amazing. I love the plot line. I love the way you wrote it. I literally had a smile on my face 90% of the time I was reading it. Thank you so much.
This is just so amazing. I love the plot line. I love the way you wrote it. I literally had a smile on my face 90% of the time I was reading it. Thank you so much.