for The Rules of Engagement1/23/2009 c5 M M
The first signs of the thaw are showing. I'm not sure they realize it yet. It was completely hilarious that his parents knew what they were up to. Even funnier that they could tell there was real attraction there. Of course, I imagine it will take a few bumps in the road to bring that to their attention. Bring on the bumps!
The first signs of the thaw are showing. I'm not sure they realize it yet. It was completely hilarious that his parents knew what they were up to. Even funnier that they could tell there was real attraction there. Of course, I imagine it will take a few bumps in the road to bring that to their attention. Bring on the bumps!
1/23/2009 c5 sayitstrue
You update quickly. I like that - almost as much as where your story as going. (: Please, more Dorian and Ant interaction! Thank you!
You update quickly. I like that - almost as much as where your story as going. (: Please, more Dorian and Ant interaction! Thank you!
1/23/2009 c5 
3Lost and No One Cares
I like it... well. so far anyway.
Doesn't seem too cliche... not yet at least.
3Lost and No One CaresI like it... well. so far anyway.
Doesn't seem too cliche... not yet at least.
1/23/2009 c5 1Jevanminx
Oh, those two are just too great for each other, I love the banter between them. The Parents were cool as well.
JM
1JevanminxOh, those two are just too great for each other, I love the banter between them. The Parents were cool as well.
JM
1/23/2009 c5 9andee lee
Oh, I really, really like this so far! The interactions between Ant and Dorian are so much fun to read! Dorian is awesome, by the way. He really makes me laugh. And I like Ant...she's an original. :-)
I think it's hilarious that his parents knew they were faking the whole time. I can't wait to see how things start to play out.
I'd love to read more, update soon!
-Andee :-)
9andee leeOh, I really, really like this so far! The interactions between Ant and Dorian are so much fun to read! Dorian is awesome, by the way. He really makes me laugh. And I like Ant...she's an original. :-)
I think it's hilarious that his parents knew they were faking the whole time. I can't wait to see how things start to play out.
I'd love to read more, update soon!
-Andee :-)
1/23/2009 c5 6crazyloveycajo
These last few chapters have really showcased their future relationship. It's not like others where everything just happens in one moment, it's gradual and believable. I love it.
6crazyloveycajoThese last few chapters have really showcased their future relationship. It's not like others where everything just happens in one moment, it's gradual and believable. I love it.
1/23/2009 c5 lovelytrees
i'm lovin it. plz continue with it
i'm lovin it. plz continue with it
1/23/2009 c4 sayitstrue
Please update soon. I really like where you're going with this. (:
Please update soon. I really like where you're going with this. (:
1/22/2009 c4 M M
Well, a few questions were answered. I think that Ant managed to do both, be on his side and hang him out to dry. I wonder if Dorian will realize he's jealous of Jorma, and what he will do about it? It will be interesting to see how far each of them will come towards the middle to be closer to the other. Update soon.
Well, a few questions were answered. I think that Ant managed to do both, be on his side and hang him out to dry. I wonder if Dorian will realize he's jealous of Jorma, and what he will do about it? It will be interesting to see how far each of them will come towards the middle to be closer to the other. Update soon.
1/22/2009 c4 lovelytrees
this story is fab... seriously. can't wait to find out more about dorian and now that theres jorma, well it should get interesting
this story is fab... seriously. can't wait to find out more about dorian and now that theres jorma, well it should get interesting
1/21/2009 c3 M M
You mean that I might be your first review? Wow, I'm honored. Its a good story, well written, interesting characters, good tension. I am curious as to why someone like Dorian who seems to come from an upper-middle class family, with a good education isn't an officer by now? Maybe you will get to that in the upcoming chapters. The next chapter should be good. Ant and Dorian may find themselves on the same side in a hostile environment. Or, she may just hang him out to dry! Update soon.
You mean that I might be your first review? Wow, I'm honored. Its a good story, well written, interesting characters, good tension. I am curious as to why someone like Dorian who seems to come from an upper-middle class family, with a good education isn't an officer by now? Maybe you will get to that in the upcoming chapters. The next chapter should be good. Ant and Dorian may find themselves on the same side in a hostile environment. Or, she may just hang him out to dry! Update soon.
1/21/2009 c3 Teenage Trash xx
I really like this :D
update soon ..
I thought I would review because its good and you
deserve the credit tbh.
I really like this :D
update soon ..
I thought I would review because its good and you
deserve the credit tbh.
1/21/2009 c3 narniafreak
Cool! keep uploading i like it alot.
Cool! keep uploading i like it alot.