for The Rules of Engagement7/9/2012 c21 Guest
What a teaser of a last chapter!
I loved the first 20 chapters. It was so interesting. I loved the disagreements, the mix ups, the love. It was a good combination. I especially loved how well you integrated the 3rd person narrator. I got a snidbit of everyone and it didn't feel too choppy.
I wish the epilogue was missing. I loved that he came home but so much happened that is unanswered and I'd love to just see what happens to their relationship without adding in her biological father to the mix. At least, not yet. You've had enough big drama moments for Ant's lifetime.
Excellent writing. Great story!
What a teaser of a last chapter!
I loved the first 20 chapters. It was so interesting. I loved the disagreements, the mix ups, the love. It was a good combination. I especially loved how well you integrated the 3rd person narrator. I got a snidbit of everyone and it didn't feel too choppy.
I wish the epilogue was missing. I loved that he came home but so much happened that is unanswered and I'd love to just see what happens to their relationship without adding in her biological father to the mix. At least, not yet. You've had enough big drama moments for Ant's lifetime.
Excellent writing. Great story!
7/7/2012 c21 Guest
Two words. Amazing story.
Two words. Amazing story.
6/28/2012 c21 
1Flashography
i just finished this story and it is all kinds of wonderful.
i loved the characters that you developed over the story, the change in Ant was nice to see and Dorian as well. This story is so realistic, the characters and the plot and everything, it's so great cause it isn't too dramatic. I love the arguments they have, i actually learn something from it! I also loved that they didn't promise each other anything with words, just actions.
I think you have a bit of spelling/punctuation errors and typos here and there, but that is about it.
Great story! : )
1Flashographyi just finished this story and it is all kinds of wonderful.
i loved the characters that you developed over the story, the change in Ant was nice to see and Dorian as well. This story is so realistic, the characters and the plot and everything, it's so great cause it isn't too dramatic. I love the arguments they have, i actually learn something from it! I also loved that they didn't promise each other anything with words, just actions.
I think you have a bit of spelling/punctuation errors and typos here and there, but that is about it.
Great story! : )
6/1/2012 c21 DAMP
I just read your story for the first time. My sister found this story for me and I just spent the last 5 hours reading it even though I'm taking the SATs tomorrow. Which just shows how much I enjoyed this story. A sequel would be great, but I understand if you don't write one. Thanks for writing this story, I love the characters. :)
I just read your story for the first time. My sister found this story for me and I just spent the last 5 hours reading it even though I'm taking the SATs tomorrow. Which just shows how much I enjoyed this story. A sequel would be great, but I understand if you don't write one. Thanks for writing this story, I love the characters. :)
5/21/2012 c21 1KJ's Manuscript
I loved this story so much I stayed up until three in the morning to finish it.
Enough said.
1KJ's ManuscriptI loved this story so much I stayed up until three in the morning to finish it.
Enough said.
2/14/2012 c1 sarahverie
I feel that ant show show a little more niceness and not be so quiet. Now as for dorian. He's a pain in the ass! good story though.
I feel that ant show show a little more niceness and not be so quiet. Now as for dorian. He's a pain in the ass! good story though.
2/7/2012 c21 Left-Handed Writer
Gah, you cannot just end the story like that and then not continue. Anyway, this is definitely one of my favourite stories on FP.
Gah, you cannot just end the story like that and then not continue. Anyway, this is definitely one of my favourite stories on FP.
2/5/2012 c21 goanywhere
This story is amazing. You are a fabulous writer. And that is all I have to say.
This story is amazing. You are a fabulous writer. And that is all I have to say.
1/21/2012 c1 1WickedSauce
It. Was. So. Good.
Mindblowingly good. Stomach flip-flop good. Ice cream sundae good.
To paraphrase, it was good.
But in all seriousness, if you don't make a sequel (especially with that helluva cliff hanger), I may just slip into a coma.
Frankly, this is the best story I've read in a while. A++ and then some.
Loved the characters. Loved the plot. Loved the timing.
To paraphrase, I loved it.
Please continue.
1WickedSauceIt. Was. So. Good.
Mindblowingly good. Stomach flip-flop good. Ice cream sundae good.
To paraphrase, it was good.
But in all seriousness, if you don't make a sequel (especially with that helluva cliff hanger), I may just slip into a coma.
Frankly, this is the best story I've read in a while. A++ and then some.
Loved the characters. Loved the plot. Loved the timing.
To paraphrase, I loved it.
Please continue.