
1/19/2009 c1 phantom232
I'm gonna cry. That's so sad... and so... Indescribable. Good job. Can't wait for your next piece.
I'm gonna cry. That's so sad... and so... Indescribable. Good job. Can't wait for your next piece.
1/19/2009 c1 alkfhdakjd1
Wow, I like it. It's very different from a lot of poem's I've read, but I really think you've written it well. It's a simple tale, but very well written and heartbreaking. =] Great job.
Wow, I like it. It's very different from a lot of poem's I've read, but I really think you've written it well. It's a simple tale, but very well written and heartbreaking. =] Great job.