for One of the Boys12/24/2013 c11 
2WhoSaidWhatNow
I have a bone to pick with you missy. 4 years! Four straight years and you haven't updated this story. And on top of that it has 400 reviews! That is quite unbelievable. humph!
-WhoSaidWhatNow(i'm here too :D)
2WhoSaidWhatNowI have a bone to pick with you missy. 4 years! Four straight years and you haven't updated this story. And on top of that it has 400 reviews! That is quite unbelievable. humph!
-WhoSaidWhatNow(i'm here too :D)
3/14/2013 c11 Guest
NO!HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?YOU WERE MY FAVORITE ALMOST-KINDA-SORTA-AUTHOR!
NO!HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?YOU WERE MY FAVORITE ALMOST-KINDA-SORTA-AUTHOR!
3/14/2013 c9 Guest
Haha seems the waitress won't be getting any tonight!
Haha seems the waitress won't be getting any tonight!
7/31/2012 c2 lovelyabundance
This story is really interesting and fun! I would love to read more and let it get more complicated and playful :)
This story is really interesting and fun! I would love to read more and let it get more complicated and playful :)
7/22/2012 c11 AnonymousReads
I repeat please I beg you not to start something you cant finish, thanks. :)
I repeat please I beg you not to start something you cant finish, thanks. :)
11/12/2011 c9 Nique13
Contradiction: In chapter 5, you had Dalton cover Charlie with hid heated blanket. You also said that he plugged it into the wall.
This chapter, they were out of electricity, so how did they use the blanket?
Great story!
Contradiction: In chapter 5, you had Dalton cover Charlie with hid heated blanket. You also said that he plugged it into the wall.
This chapter, they were out of electricity, so how did they use the blanket?
Great story!
10/29/2011 c11 noor
ohkay
at the end of chapter ten i was like:
"you just did something extremly awesome."
and yeah... that sort of sums up my hyper-giggling-laughing-squealing joyride through your fic.
youre abandoning it?
:
meanie
ohkay
at the end of chapter ten i was like:
"you just did something extremly awesome."
and yeah... that sort of sums up my hyper-giggling-laughing-squealing joyride through your fic.
youre abandoning it?
:
meanie
7/1/2011 c11 cosmetgirl
Come back! Im having withdrawal symptoms from your story! U gotta update :(((
Come back! Im having withdrawal symptoms from your story! U gotta update :(((
6/16/2011 c11 violet.castle
Shouldn't it be a crime leaving the readers on the line? :( huhuhu. I loved this story...
Shouldn't it be a crime leaving the readers on the line? :( huhuhu. I loved this story...
4/30/2011 c10 1TheLastFireBender
omg!CANT BELEIVE that ur abandoning this awesome story "sniff sniff" i can see how much u luv ur fans jks lol great story though...not...thx for updating nd if u hav time plz finish the story thx xoxo
1TheLastFireBenderomg!CANT BELEIVE that ur abandoning this awesome story "sniff sniff" i can see how much u luv ur fans jks lol great story though...not...thx for updating nd if u hav time plz finish the story thx xoxo
8/13/2010 c11 PunkRockPrincess
nonono:(! Please finish One Of The Boys...I like it lots!
nonono:(! Please finish One Of The Boys...I like it lots!
6/8/2010 c1 1XxwaitformidnightxX
i know ur buissy w/ other stories but please update and try to finish thisone!
1XxwaitformidnightxXi know ur buissy w/ other stories but please update and try to finish thisone!