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7/18/2009 c11 thefrogsareattacking
Please please finish!
7/18/2009 c8 thefrogsareattacking
Sleeping beauty finally awoke! And maybe a kiss...O =P
7/15/2009 c10 lauureen
I realy like your story.

:) keep writing!
7/7/2009 c11 1Goin-to-Cali-bby-10211994
why did u stop writing ihate it when people do that because it was just getting to a good part.if ur not gunna finish writing them then why post it at all.its a tease so just take it off or something.
6/21/2009 c11 xximinluvxx
oh poohy

can i continue it? Or if that isnt okay, can i use some of your ideas? i have a couple for this story, but its really to good to abandon...
6/19/2009 c11 turp
ah extreme disappointment. At the same moment I realized I read you before I find out the story that I think has possibly the 6th highest chance of FP to be published is being abandoned for The Thin Line which, no offense, was somewhat corny. The better pieces that everyone seems to like are always more difficult to write. All the world seems to like my Story Spelled Out and I think its a corny piece of crap that is impossible to write and would have died if I hadnt had a planned to the T plot. I hope you will actually start writing this again and remove some of the corny bits with realistic bits because as some smart dead person said the difference between fiction and reality is fiction has to make sense
6/14/2009 c11 darkgurl92
their in a suite...hmm..interesting..update soon..
6/11/2009 c11 u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME
Awesome story, Charlie is so cool and dalton is so hott. r they going to be in new York from Friday to Monday or is it Sunday to Monday? Plz update soon :)
6/11/2009 c11 romancecrazii
how could you abandon this story and 'our summer' they are both totally awesome! :( if u do get more inspiration about either of these stories later on please continue, i know i sound whiny but it's just both of these stories were so good.
6/11/2009 c11 aflores90
Bummed that you're stopping your stories, but CONGRATS on the nomination. You totally deserved it!
6/4/2009 c10 Blue Bird Cry
Ah! Tres addictive!

Excuse me if I sound rude or demanding... but PLEASE HURRY UP AND UPDATE! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Brilliant writing, as you may have seen me write throughout al of your stories. Maybe you should take a hint? You're just an incredible writer. :D

Can't wait until I get an email notifying me of the next chapter. I'm an insomniac, what can I say? Please don't disappoint.

Have a great day! Hope you're all recovered and feeling better from surgery and enjoying having your gorgeous little niece!. :)
6/3/2009 c10 6Broken Lies
Are u alive? lol hope so! plz plz plz update soon!
5/28/2009 c10 7cookiepiecookiepie
update soon. :)
5/26/2009 c4 1CLocKRabBiT
Actually this pace is alright with me. I loved Our Room but this story seems more refined, I mean the details are better laid out. I still think Belle's personality was stronger 'thou. She was very grounded and was constantly at Dean's face, I liked that. I feel that Charlie is too meek right now, I expected her to fight more about the roomate changings, I got a little disappointed. Up 'till now Dalton is okay I guess, not so passionate but since he feels so much about rugby I feel he must have some fire inside him. How come nobody said anything about Charlie and Dalton living together? And Chase and Baja?

Did you describe any of them? Apart from Dalton's very sexy body? Eyes, hair, skin, please?

I get it Charlie knows Dalton since forever, so why doesn't she trust him? This whole thing with the ex-boyfriend is a little stupid if you ask me... But, let's see where that goes.

I can't feel the chemistry, put some chemistry!
5/17/2009 c10 32justagirlx3
tee hees this is me reviewing!
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