4/30/2009 c10 buwan anghel
i love your new story. well to me it's a new story. it was sad that charlie got beaten up by tyler though and it didn't help that dalton and charlie weren't on good terms. it might be similar to our room, which i totally love since i reread it often, but i consider it to be different.
i love your new story. well to me it's a new story. it was sad that charlie got beaten up by tyler though and it didn't help that dalton and charlie weren't on good terms. it might be similar to our room, which i totally love since i reread it often, but i consider it to be different.
4/29/2009 c10 4Faithfully Connected
This story is amazing. Very amusing you're a very good writer I hope you update soon
This story is amazing. Very amusing you're a very good writer I hope you update soon
4/26/2009 c10 Kayquin
This is a great story! Please update soon
This is a great story! Please update soon
4/22/2009 c10 Obsession Changes Things
Too fuuny. Your work is absalutlly wonderful. I can't believe Charlie got beaten up! Tyler needs to be put in his place mayjorly. This is great, update soon!
~Obsession
Too fuuny. Your work is absalutlly wonderful. I can't believe Charlie got beaten up! Tyler needs to be put in his place mayjorly. This is great, update soon!
~Obsession
4/16/2009 c10 abmoreland
Very cute ending. Loved the fork incident too. Now lets see this story really start to heat up, they are there for the whole weekend right? Sorry about your surgery, I know it sucks I have been thru 12 in my lifetime so far. Congrats on the niece too, funtimes!
Very cute ending. Loved the fork incident too. Now lets see this story really start to heat up, they are there for the whole weekend right? Sorry about your surgery, I know it sucks I have been thru 12 in my lifetime so far. Congrats on the niece too, funtimes!
4/16/2009 c9 abmoreland
OK, you almost frickin lost me in this chapter when you said FORD CAMARO - UGH! I am so sidetracked right now that it is hard to keep reading, I had to comment right away! I am a HUGE car buff, raised on cars, breath cars! My first car at 16 was a 1968 cherry red fastback Ford MUSTANG in mint condition! Set up with NOX as well, I started racing early on and love it. I kick all the guys arses at the track, and I am happily married now for 15 yrs with 3 children. And no my husband is not a car buff, but supports me so very well. So honey I know you are female (I am too, so no excuse) and young, much younger than me. But for all that is holy please do not disgrace us like this. Guys are always looking to make all of us girls out to be dumb, blonde bimbos that know nothing about anything testoterone related.
I will give you that sometimes in racing Camaros have been built with Ford engines, thus referring to them as Ford Camaros. But that was not what you were refering to by the waiting list and brand new car part. And there has been some ungodly talk of Ford and Chevy coming together in 2015 and making a Ford Camaro, just to try to put American made cars back on top vs. foreign ones. But I am telling you it will be a HUGE disaster if they do.
So please, please, please make a correction here and say either Ford Mustang or Chevy Camaro. Now that my rant is over I will get a beer, try to relax and get back to reading.
OK, you almost frickin lost me in this chapter when you said FORD CAMARO - UGH! I am so sidetracked right now that it is hard to keep reading, I had to comment right away! I am a HUGE car buff, raised on cars, breath cars! My first car at 16 was a 1968 cherry red fastback Ford MUSTANG in mint condition! Set up with NOX as well, I started racing early on and love it. I kick all the guys arses at the track, and I am happily married now for 15 yrs with 3 children. And no my husband is not a car buff, but supports me so very well. So honey I know you are female (I am too, so no excuse) and young, much younger than me. But for all that is holy please do not disgrace us like this. Guys are always looking to make all of us girls out to be dumb, blonde bimbos that know nothing about anything testoterone related.
I will give you that sometimes in racing Camaros have been built with Ford engines, thus referring to them as Ford Camaros. But that was not what you were refering to by the waiting list and brand new car part. And there has been some ungodly talk of Ford and Chevy coming together in 2015 and making a Ford Camaro, just to try to put American made cars back on top vs. foreign ones. But I am telling you it will be a HUGE disaster if they do.
So please, please, please make a correction here and say either Ford Mustang or Chevy Camaro. Now that my rant is over I will get a beer, try to relax and get back to reading.
4/16/2009 c10 1shredding-fire
This story is awesome! I dont think that Dalton and Charlie are going to fast. Puh-leese update soon! =P
This story is awesome! I dont think that Dalton and Charlie are going to fast. Puh-leese update soon! =P
4/9/2009 c10 1Esdursayshii
YAY! your an aunt! i was waiting so long for the next chapter hurry up! ohh and r yu gonna update our summer? i wanna noe what happens next!
YAY! your an aunt! i was waiting so long for the next chapter hurry up! ohh and r yu gonna update our summer? i wanna noe what happens next!
4/4/2009 c10 Joseph33759
well I have to say I like the story I'm not going to say anything else though LOL
well I have to say I like the story I'm not going to say anything else though LOL
4/4/2009 c10 Amanda
Go!Go!Go!
Hope great sex next chapter!
Charlie and Dalton in a honeymoon suite! Romantic! I loved it! I'll kill her if she miss this chance!
kisses
Go!Go!Go!
Hope great sex next chapter!
Charlie and Dalton in a honeymoon suite! Romantic! I loved it! I'll kill her if she miss this chance!
kisses
4/1/2009 c10 3shy green rock
OMG that' is hilarious...the honeymoon suite!
I'm sorry I haven't been reading lately, but I'm glad you updated...and you did a good job!
OMG that' is hilarious...the honeymoon suite!
I'm sorry I haven't been reading lately, but I'm glad you updated...and you did a good job!