for One of the Boys3/30/2009 c10 
6THEXXHOPELESSXXROMANTIC
aw dalton was so adorable in this chapter! loved him! oh and the fork scene was brilliance-loved that she caused that much trouble. I love the honeymoon sweet idea, its funny! i cant wait to see what happens next! update soon! it was a good chapter.
ooh and i hope your feeling better-surgery sucks
and congrats on your new niece!
-hopelessromantic
6THEXXHOPELESSXXROMANTICaw dalton was so adorable in this chapter! loved him! oh and the fork scene was brilliance-loved that she caused that much trouble. I love the honeymoon sweet idea, its funny! i cant wait to see what happens next! update soon! it was a good chapter.
ooh and i hope your feeling better-surgery sucks
and congrats on your new niece!
-hopelessromantic
3/30/2009 c10 2xMoose
first off, hope you're recovering smoothly from your surgery...i had one a while back. and CONGRATS on the neice! hehe. i bet she's a cutie! :)
alright, back to the chapter. whoo! an update. what a perfect time to leave us hanging with the ending on the last chapter, eh? haha. this chap was cute and hilarious throughout. though dalton and charlie seem to be moving kinda fast realistically speaking (not that i have a problem with it), it's fun and seems natural for the most part. i really love their chemistry. and it's not all hot and heavy - atleast not yet, but the humor is...soothing? basically it's nice to see that there's more to their bond and characters other than touchy touchy actions.
i don't know how they're gonna react to the hotel room, but no doubt, it will be a good one. haha. please update SOON! dying here!
2xMoosefirst off, hope you're recovering smoothly from your surgery...i had one a while back. and CONGRATS on the neice! hehe. i bet she's a cutie! :)
alright, back to the chapter. whoo! an update. what a perfect time to leave us hanging with the ending on the last chapter, eh? haha. this chap was cute and hilarious throughout. though dalton and charlie seem to be moving kinda fast realistically speaking (not that i have a problem with it), it's fun and seems natural for the most part. i really love their chemistry. and it's not all hot and heavy - atleast not yet, but the humor is...soothing? basically it's nice to see that there's more to their bond and characters other than touchy touchy actions.
i don't know how they're gonna react to the hotel room, but no doubt, it will be a good one. haha. please update SOON! dying here!
3/30/2009 c10 3silent-CRYS
its about time that you updated.
omg.
they kissed.finally
i liked the ending.
i cant wait until chap.11!
3silent-CRYSits about time that you updated.
omg.
they kissed.finally
i liked the ending.
i cant wait until chap.11!
3/30/2009 c10 5MrAshley420
ugh. thank god you finally updated.
very enjoyable.
update soon please.
=]
5MrAshley420ugh. thank god you finally updated.
very enjoyable.
update soon please.
=]
3/30/2009 c10 TemptedByLaNuit
*bursts out laughing*
Priceless, absolutely priceless. I can just imagine Dalton smacking his head in an appalled manner, which Charlie just stares at the room in shock.
You just made my morning! :)
*bursts out laughing*
Priceless, absolutely priceless. I can just imagine Dalton smacking his head in an appalled manner, which Charlie just stares at the room in shock.
You just made my morning! :)
3/29/2009 c10 Blackrain7557
Very good story, good writing, good drama and tension. Characters are full and expanded and your situations are realistic and fun. Overall looking forward to the next chapter.
Very good story, good writing, good drama and tension. Characters are full and expanded and your situations are realistic and fun. Overall looking forward to the next chapter.
3/29/2009 c10 JustAnotherLibroLover
Huh Frickin Larious! That was great, I was so expecting some fancy penthouse type room, but you just had to go and switch things up! Please update soon!
Huh Frickin Larious! That was great, I was so expecting some fancy penthouse type room, but you just had to go and switch things up! Please update soon!
3/29/2009 c10 GR4CKY
oh noez don't say that you happened to get your wisdom teeth out
if not, then i hope you recover from your surgery well
loved the chapter
oh noez don't say that you happened to get your wisdom teeth out
if not, then i hope you recover from your surgery well
loved the chapter
3/29/2009 c10 2book.babe15
haha i love awkward situations. glad you're back, i hope you're okay after your surgery and congrats for the niece that's very exciting!
2book.babe15haha i love awkward situations. glad you're back, i hope you're okay after your surgery and congrats for the niece that's very exciting!
3/29/2009 c10 Felicia
It's getting late but I couldn't wait till morning to read, and I'm glad i didnt! Oo, can't wait to see what will happen next..i have a few ideas. Keep it up!
It's getting late but I couldn't wait till morning to read, and I'm glad i didnt! Oo, can't wait to see what will happen next..i have a few ideas. Keep it up!