for One of the Boys3/27/2009 c9 BellaJane
i've read all your stories and i love them just as much as i loved this one my favourite is Our Room its awsome and so cute, One Of The Boys is a little like it but still different i really like it. And with the song names as chapter names clever anyway how long will this story be?
xobellajanexo
GoodLuck
i've read all your stories and i love them just as much as i loved this one my favourite is Our Room its awsome and so cute, One Of The Boys is a little like it but still different i really like it. And with the song names as chapter names clever anyway how long will this story be?
xobellajanexo
GoodLuck
3/26/2009 c9 Jester79
Sounds good so far. I didn't really think you were rushing the beginning of Charlie & Dalton, you made a point in saying that they had known each other awhile. But, it does give it some spice. I'm sure I won't be the only one to say this and if it gets to repetitive, I'm sorry. But, Camaro is Chevy - Mustang is Ford. And not sure but with the power off I wouldn't have thought he would have an electric blanket? Just minor things, I do like the stories though.
Sounds good so far. I didn't really think you were rushing the beginning of Charlie & Dalton, you made a point in saying that they had known each other awhile. But, it does give it some spice. I'm sure I won't be the only one to say this and if it gets to repetitive, I'm sorry. But, Camaro is Chevy - Mustang is Ford. And not sure but with the power off I wouldn't have thought he would have an electric blanket? Just minor things, I do like the stories though.
3/23/2009 c9 Zenia
What kind of author doesn't update in over a month?
-Bye
What kind of author doesn't update in over a month?
-Bye
3/16/2009 c9 Corii
I love this story I really do. I like the idea of someone so innocent as Charlie and then having someone who can help her come along! I really do wish you can update soon.
Thanks!
Xox
I love this story I really do. I like the idea of someone so innocent as Charlie and then having someone who can help her come along! I really do wish you can update soon.
Thanks!
Xox
3/12/2009 c9 
1AvidReader22
I love love love this story so far! It sounds so great, and I like the way you're going with Charlie and Dalton's story! I can't wait for you to update your stories, keep up the good work :)
1AvidReader22I love love love this story so far! It sounds so great, and I like the way you're going with Charlie and Dalton's story! I can't wait for you to update your stories, keep up the good work :)
3/8/2009 c9 2xMoose
poopie waitress. dalton and charlie are adorable.
liked this chapter. update soon please :)
2xMoosepoopie waitress. dalton and charlie are adorable.
liked this chapter. update soon please :)
3/7/2009 c9 Erica71167
I love this story so far. I also read Our Room and loved it! You're a great writer! I can't wait for the next update.
I love this story so far. I also read Our Room and loved it! You're a great writer! I can't wait for the next update.
3/6/2009 c9 Amanda
I love this story so far. You are such a great writer. I can't wait for the kiss. Please Update Soon!
I love this story so far. You are such a great writer. I can't wait for the kiss. Please Update Soon!
3/4/2009 c9 2HiddenRoses.BlankPages
Wow! I love this story! Funny and romantic. Great chapter! I cannot belive you didn't let them kiss! lol.
2HiddenRoses.BlankPagesWow! I love this story! Funny and romantic. Great chapter! I cannot belive you didn't let them kiss! lol.
2/27/2009 c9 qtanimeluvr
loved it great job! cant wait 4 the kiss ^_^ hehe
ps leggy red head waitress lady sucks
loved it great job! cant wait 4 the kiss ^_^ hehe
ps leggy red head waitress lady sucks
2/27/2009 c9 anonymous
this is a really good story. i usually like your stories though, so no surprise there. please update soon. happy belated birthday as well
this is a really good story. i usually like your stories though, so no surprise there. please update soon. happy belated birthday as well
2/26/2009 c9 5MrAshley420
i think, i my personal opinion, that you're taking things a little too fast with them. but beside that i've never complained, keep up the good work. =]
5MrAshley420i think, i my personal opinion, that you're taking things a little too fast with them. but beside that i've never complained, keep up the good work. =]
2/25/2009 c1 Kar00
Giving you a precious review. HA here it is. You deserve it! I really am enjoying this story, so I'd love to see an update!
Giving you a precious review. HA here it is. You deserve it! I really am enjoying this story, so I'd love to see an update!