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5/15/2009 c1 113403 Forbidden
This is beautiful. You created a really vivid image, as well as an accurate and powerful metaphor. I really like the lines "Some can't find the matching pieces, so they put them back where they were found and walk away." as it describes both the metaphorical way people act, and how people aptly handle broken, lost, or confusing things in real life. Good work.

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1/20/2009 c1 1artisticbones
Interesting. I found it interesting with the puzzle pieces, and no one can solve it. I especially liked when you said the people were cut when they picked up the broken pieces. Thank You, Was a good read. Please read my story, and leave an honest review of what you think. Thanks.

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